Tarnished Silver, Broken Tiara
Diamond Tiara slowly trudged down the hall of the palace, painful rage burning inside of her. Princess Celestia had given her an apartment in the castle and had ordered her servants to retrieve some necessities from her home in Ponyville so that she could live there until the matter with the media was settled. However that was not on Diamond Tiara's mind at the moment. What consumed her thoughts was the foal. Sweetie Belle's foal.
She was here somewhere.
It was common knowledge that Princess Celestia had taken that runt in and was housing her while her mother rotted away in a nuthouse when she should have been rotting away in the ground next to her evil sister. In fact, both Sweetie Belle and her foal should have suffered that fate. That would be justice.
Still, there was the slight issue that Diamond Tiara faced in that she didn't know where the foal was. The palace was quite vast and she could be anywhere. Princess Celestia had her in the dungeons as far as she knew. Diamond Tiara mused that that would be slightly fitting, but that Celestia likely had her in a cushy room with servants to wait on her all day. Meanwhile her baby was...was in the ground.
Diamond Tiara felt tears well up inside her eyes once again and it took the burning rage to felt towards Sweetie Belle and her foal to keep them at bay.
In truth she didn't know what she would actually do when she found Sweetie Belle's child. She knew she wouldn't kill her, but the idea was... tantalizing. She could make Sweetie Belle suffer just as much, if not more, than she was already suffering. Maybe she could even smuggle the body out of the castle if she was careful enough. Yes, maybe she could do that and mail locks of Blossom's mane to Sweetie Belle so she would know what had happened. Diamond Tiara giggled madly to herself. She would give up Barnyard Bargains to see her reaction to that.
Diamond Tiara's fantasies were interrupted when she heard a voice call out from behind her. "Diamond Tiara?"
Diamond Tiara wheeled around and saw Silver Spoon walking up to her. She glared at her former friend before turning her back to her. "I don't have anything to say to you."
Silver Spoon ran up next to Diamond Tiara. "B-But I--"
"I said I don't want to talk to you!" screeched the pink mare, wheeling around to glare at Silver Spoon. "Why would I ever want to talk to you again after you accused me of murdering our children?!"
Silver Spoon wilted under Diamond Tiara's rage and she took an uneasy step back. "I didn't--"
"Didn't what, didn't mean it?" spat Diamond Tiara. "Don't lie to me, you meant every word! You made it sound like I told Sweetie Belle to kill my foal!"
Silver Spoon's mouth flopped up and down like a fish as she tried to find any words that would allow her to contradict Diamond Tiara's rage, but none came. Finally she took a deep breath and looked down the hallway. "What are you going to do to her?"
"I don't know," Diamond Tiara growled. "I wouldn't want to be her, though." Diamond Tiara shook her head angrily and began walking down the hall again. Silver Spoon rushed to her side and briefly considered blocking Diamond Tiara's path before she did something she regretted. Diamond Tiara shot her a glare. "Well, why are you still here?"
"Because I don't want you to do anything you're going to regret."
Diamond Tiara scoffed. "I wouldn't regret hurting her foal."
"Diamond Tiara listen to yourself!" said Silver Spoon incredulously. "You've never wanted to hurt anypony in your life; not like that! What would you do if Golden Necklace saw you doing that?!"
"I'd hold Blossom down and ask Golden Necklace to help Mommy with something," said Diamond Tiara simply.
Silver Spoon gasped and actually moved in front of Diamond Tiara. "How could you say something like that?!"
"Spoon, get the buck out of my way."
Silver Spoon shook her head. "Now listen, DT! You're hurting a lot, I am too! It isn't fair that Sweetie Belle's foal is still alive and ours aren't but I still don't want to hurt her! Blossom is innocent, she didn't ask for all of this to happen!"
"Silver Spoon if you do not get out of my way in the next three seconds I will make sure you spend the rest of your life wishing that you had."
Silver Spoon raised a hoof to take a step backwards but bravely stood her ground. "I'm not going to let you hurt that child. We're insulting the memory of both of our foals if you do! They wouldn't want their mommies to turn into something like that!"
Diamond Tiara's jaw clenched and she took a menacing step forward. "One."
"Don't do this, we're old friends!"
Another step forward. "Two."
"If you try to hurt her I'll...I'll fight you I swear to Celestia I will!"
"Thr--"
Diamond Tiara's final warning was cut off as the faintest sound entered her ears. She swiveled them in the direction of the noise and slowly turned her head to see if she couldn't locate the source. It sounded like... laughter. Yes, that was it, laughter. And it was coming from behind that door about a dozen paces away. She turned around and slowly began trotting towards the door, straining to hear what was behind it. Silver Spoon uneasily trotted behind her while being sure to keep her distance.
When she reached the door, Diamond Tiara reached a hoof towards the doorknob. With one swift motion she pulled the door open revealing what was inside.
The foal was inside. The foal was inside with Sweetie Belle. They were together and they were laughing together and they seemed so... happy. Sweetie Belle was missing her horn, but she was with her child and for her that was all that mattered; all was right with the world when her child was near. Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon looked on at the joyful scene in shock for a moment before Silver Spoon collapsed on the ground with a loud wail of sorrow. Sweetie Belle and Blossom both looked towards the door. Sweetie Belle gasped and pulled Blossom into her forelegs and backed up towards the far wall.
Diamond Tiara studied the scene for a while, secretly relishing in the fear that her mere presence elicited in the two ponies. She slowly stepped inside and pointed at Blossom. "The foal. Give her to me. Now."
Sweetie Belle hit the back wall and held out a hoof as if to block Diamond Tiara's advance. "Stay away from us," she begged. "Go away!"
"Shut up you little bitch and give me the bucking foal before I take her myself."
Blossom whimpered and buried her head in her mother's chest. Sweetie Belle kept trying to back away. "Get out of here! Leave my child alone!"
Diamond Tiara let out a humorless cackle. "I don't think so," she giggled. "I'm going to leave you alone, but I'm going to tear that bastard foal from your forelegs and do you know what I'm going to do?"
Sweetie Belle whimpered and began backing into the corner. "Go away!"
"First I'm going to take her away from you, then I'm going to hold her head steady so she's looking directly into your eyes."
Sweetie Belle began sobbing as she hit the corner. "Help!" she called out weakly.
"Then I'm going to take my right foreleg and hook it under your daughter's chin and then I'm going to pull it back as hard as I can, snapping her neck like a twig."
"Somepony please help us!" Sweetie Belle called a little louder.
"I'm going to snap her neck and because she's looking at you you're going to see the light leave her eyes and you'll have that memory to cherish for the rest of your pathetic existence. You'll spend the rest of your days replaying the exact moment you saw your daughter die in front of you day after day after day."
"HELP!" Sweetie Belle screamed.
Diamond Tiara cackled and continued moving forward. "I'm going to throw her corpse right at your hooves. I don't care what you do with it after that." Her twisted smile immediately shifted to rage. "NOW GIVE ME THAT FOAL!"
Before Diamond Tiara could take another step forwards Blossom tore herself out of her mother's grasp and encased the table in the room with her magical glow. She levitated it in front of her creating a barrier between her and the murderous mare. Undeterred, Diamond Tiara snarled and bucked the table as hard as she could. Her earth pony strength and blood lust combined with Blossom's relatively weak grip on such a heavy object meant that the table went flying towards the wall. Blossom ducked to avoid it and Diamond Tiara seized her opportunity and reached for the foal.
Her advances were cut off when a pair of white hind legs collided with her forehead. The force of the blow from Sweetie Belle sent her flying backwards into the opposite wall. Sweetie Belle stepped in front of her daughter and took a step towards Diamond Tiara, all semblance of sanity and calm long since gone at the thought of her child in danger.
"Get away from her you bitch!"
Diamond Tiara shook her head to clear the grogginess that had come from her collision with the wall and slowly tried to stand up, but Sweetie Belle lunged forward and tackled her before she could and began wailing on her. "YOU WILL NOT TOUCH MY FOAL!!!" she screamed.
Diamond Tiara screamed herself as Sweetie belle continued to rain punches down on her once again tormentor while her daughter cried in the corner. Age and maternal rage had increased the power behind Sweetie Belle's attacks and Diamond Tiara would have likely found herself joining her foal in death it a trio of royal guards hadn't tackled Sweetie Belle, pinning her to the ground and securing her with hoofcuffs.
Blossom squealed as the guards started to drag Sweetie Belle of the room. She ran forward and wrapped her forelegs around her mother's waist. "Don't take my mommy away!" she wailed.
Before the guards could do anything, the chaos was cut off by a powerful voice booming through the halls. "STOP!!!!"
Instantly everypony froze where they were as Shining Armor himself walked down the hall flanked by six more soldiers and a sobbing Silver Spoon. The captain of the guard halted in front of the entrance to the room and glared at everypony inside. "What is going on here?" he growled.
There was a pause for a moment before Diamond Tiara let out a wail and threw herself at Shining Armor's hooves. "Oh thank goodness you're here!" she cried. "That mare is crazy! She tried to kill me!"
Shining Armor turned his angry gaze to Diamond Tiara. "What do you mean?"
"I was walking down the hall and she must have heard me talking to my friend Silver Spoon! She jumped me and stated hitting me; she tried to kill me!"
"That's not true!" Sweetie Belle retorted. "You came in here and you tried to kill my daughter!"
"I would never!" cried Diamond Tiara.
"Then how did you get in here and why is the table overturned against the opposite wall?" said Shining Armor quietly.
Diamond Tiara sniffled and looked up at Shining Armor. "Huh?"
"Sweetie Belle jumped you and took the time to drag you in here even though she knew that killing you would end with her execution which would mean that she could never see Blossom again, is that what you're saying? Even with that, how did the table get overturned and what are those dents in it?"
Blossom moved her head away from her mother's chest to speak up. "She told Mommy that she wanted to break my neck," she whimpered. "I lifted the table and put it between us so that she couldn’t get to us so she kicked it into the wall. She tried to grab me but Mommy kicked her and started hitting her when she tried to get back up to hurt me."
Diamond Tiara looked up at Shining Armor and vigorously shook her head. "N-No that isn't what happened at all! Why would I hurt that foal?"
Shining Armor was silent as he shifted his gaze between Blossom, Sweetie Belle and Diamond Tiara. Finally he took a deep breath and spoke. "The reason I was called here is because Silver Spoon found me and started talking incoherently to me. I wasn't able to understand much, but I did hear the words 'Blossom', 'Sweetie Belle', 'Diamond Tiara', and 'trying to murder'."
Diamond Tiara let out a sigh of relief. "See, she saw it too! She--"
Shining Armor cut Diamond Tiara off with a wave of his hoof. "But considering that of the two of you only you had the motive and when I take into account how the placement and condition of the table lines up perfectly with Blossoms story, the only one that can account for it, I'm going to say that you are the one who committed the crime of attempted murder."
Diamond Tiara whimpered and scooted backwards a few inches. "N-No! I would never do that! Tell him, Silver Spoon, tell him that you saw Sweetie Belle attack me!"
Silver Spoon's sobs echoed throughout the halls but she managed to speak through them. "W-Why didn't you j-just leave Sweetie B-Belle and her innocent foal alone? W-Why did you have to go l-looking for them?" she sobbed.
Diamond Tiara froze in total shock. She was unable to fully comprehend Silver Spoon's words until she saw Shining Armor take a pair of hoofcuffs off of the belt of one of his subordinates. "Diamond Tiara you are under arrest for the crime of attempted murder of the unicorn foal Joyous Blossom." Diamond Tiara squealed as the hoofcuffs were placed on her forelegs and she tried to back up further but she was stopped by the guards who had released Sweetie Belle by this point. They fired up their horns and encased Diamond Tiara in a powerful shield spell and lifted her into the air.
Diamond Tiara screamed in horror and began desperately pounding on the shield. "I WASN'T GONNA HURT HER!" she wailed. "I WASN'T, I SWEAR!"
"Take her to the dungeons," said Shining Armor. "The princesses will likely want to deal with this themselves. Also if somepony could escort Ms. Spoon to her room I would appreciate that." Two guards saluted and prodded Silver Spoon until she was on her hooves and began walking her to her room. Diamond Tiara was taken away in the opposite direction, still kicking and screaming. Eventually the cries of both of them faded away leaving only Shining Armor, Blossom, and Sweetie Belle in the room.
Shining Armor sighed and removed Sweetie Belle's hoofcuffs. "I'm sorry, I should have posted guards by the door when the two of them came into the castle."
Sweetie Belle sniffled and wiped her eyes with her foreleg. "S'okay," she whispered. "You couldn't have known that they were gonna do that."
Shining Armor nodded. "Yeah. I guess not." Shining Armor took a deep breath and gave the hoofcuffs to one of the guards who was waiting outside the room. "I'm going to suggest that the princesses tack on another day to your visit. It's the least I can do after all of this."
Sweetie Belle's eyes began filling with tears once more, but this time they were tears of joy. She gave Shining Armor a watery smile. "Thank you," she whispered. "Thank you."
Blossom adjusted herself in her mother's forelegs until she could see Shining Armor. "What's gonna happen to Miss Tiara?" she asked.
Shining Armor's jaw tightened and he glanced down the hall that Diamond Tiara had been taken down. "Our laws are very clear about attempted murder. Committing such a crime warrants life in prison. However considering her mental state brought on by everything that's happened she might get a reduced sentence. Not much of one but still." Shining Armor sighed and ran a hoof through his mane. "I'm going to have you two moved to a more comfortable room and I'm going to post guards at the door. I know it's less private for the two of you but..."
Sweetie Belle nodded. "We understand." She leaned her head down and nuzzled Blossom before glancing back up at Shining Armor. "Why was she even at the castle anyway?"
Shining Armor shifted uncomfortably and glanced over at one of the guards outside the room who shook his head. Shining Armor sighed and nodded. "Trust me, you don't want to know."
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Wow, that was unexpected.
CALLED IT!!!!!!
2273630 Then I have done my job
its spoon
Fuck yes! That bitch deserved it! I really really hope this story doesn't end in tragedy like the other two, but in any case hooray for this small victory!
2273900 Fixed. Danke.
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Yes! She deserved to have her child die for a slightly cruel prank, Deserved to see her child's corpse suddenly thrust into her face (That she didn't see before) and into the public by way of Newspaper, and then deserved to see her murderer having a completely happy, and lavish time with her own foal that is actually the killer! And knowing that the Child is being completely taken by completely Luxury because of the princesses blatant favoritism for those related to the Elements of Harmony.
Wait no, Nobody deserves that!
The funny thing is that if Diamond Tiara were one of the Elements of Harmony, Celestia would try to fight for their reduced sentence, considering how blatant her favoritism for Twilight was even though she had a heavy hand in the last one.
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By "Deserving that" I mean that she deserves to know how her actions caused this to happen in some sense. Losing her child was sad, that I will not deny, but the fact of the matter is if she never let her child expose RArity's past to Blossom and she never taught her child to hate, this all could have been avoided in the first place. And the fact that she was willing to "kill" to get revenge in her state shows her even more dwindling mindset and that makes her a danger to ponies.
Having her children's corpse on the papers was unfortunate, and I hope those media bastards pay for what they did. But the fact of the matter is this. Diamond Tiara's actions have some part in what has happened to Blossom and Sweetie Belle. Not to excuse Blossom for committing murder, but at the same time the actions of others help influence what has happened her.
This was a good point B. With DT and SS in the castle at the same time as SB and Blossom, I knew they'd run into each other. I wasn't expecting DT to go off the deep end, but you handled that well. I could see her rage and grief leading her to attempt murder. She probably would have succeeded too if not for Silver.
So SS is finally being rational, DT is still full of hatred for SB, and now the princesses get to try and clean up the entire mess. It seems to be building to a conclusion quickly. As the princesses investigate both the photos and DT's attempted murder, they're likely to get to the truth behind the killings. Might they even deem it self-defense and free everypony involved? Or perhaps you plan to end with every pony getting executed? Can't wait to see.
I feel bad for DT.
And at the same time, I don't.
On the one hand, this is pretty much her fault for how she raised her daughter, as well as Silver for forking over the article on rarity.
On the other hand, there's the whole, 'kill blossom to get back at S.B' mentality.
I'd support her on this if she knew that blossom was guilty.
But given her motive and reasoning she deserves prison time.
Then again, she wasn't completley in the wrong since Celestia should have known better than to let DT stay in the same area as S.B and blossom in the first place.
Even if Celestia wasn't thinking, she was still at fault here.
Maybe even more than DT.
She knew that DT was still an emotional train wreck.
And if she forgot about S.B and blossom then she must have been smoking some powerful stuff.
How do you forget something that important?
That's almost like putting a wolf in the same park as a Doe and its Fawn and expecting the wolf not to try and go on the attack.
So I don't think DT should go to prison for anything over a few months.
Actually, I take that back.
I don't think that she should go to prison period.
I say put her in a cell for a day or two so that see can calm down.
At the most, I say put up a restraining order, but that's it.
Just... WOW!
While I can understand Diamond Tiara's rage and desire for revenge, what she was attempting to do was wrong. Still, it is very understandable that she would attempt to do just that, given the opportunity.
One cannot totally blame Celestia either for what had just transpired. Somehow, I do not feel she would have suspected that Diamond Tiara would have done what she had did. Remember, these ponies live in a society where such crimes are beyond rare, to the point of being virtually unheard of.
Yeah I know what you mean about the swearing. And not to put down the story, but I really hate it when "bucking" is used instead of it's synonym. To me every time I hear it I think of how when Applejack says she is going out to buck apples she's swearing. But too often I see it keeps people from getting all butt hurt over the word fuck.
Anyway, I'm loving the story thus far, a very good chapter to a very good part of this series. Keep it up!
2274096>>2274181>>2274233>>2274311 you all bring up valid points and I love your conversations (which is the whole idea) and all I ask is for your trust in the matter. It's more complicated than face value I promise, something you seem to grasp which I love.
It isn't over as I'm sure you all know.
On the other side, I'm not pointing hooves (really I'm not) but I hope that the thumbs down didn't come as a result of somebody doing it because they disagreed with the other side. That's not cool as the reason I make this so emotionally complex and morally gray is to facilitate discussion, not a flame war.
Again, not pointing fingers. I love your guys' talks about the matter and I hope you enjoy my plans!
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Her dwindling mindset has come about because it hasn't exactly been to long since her childs death, and then the fact that it was brought up suddenly because of the paper.
Notice how she wasn't planning to kill the child at first, if she was alone, but then compare how she saw her in loving arms with her "killer" mother, as if nothing bad has happened to the two, as if they were living a perfect, normal lifestyle. As mother and daughter, which has been denied to her because her foal has died. How she'll never get to hold her again, how her murderer still lives and is able to visit her own with no real repercussion (in her eyes)
Now her rage is explained, she went to far, but it's quite easy to see how one would go into a blind, rageful, fury. It's the same as if anyone saw their family's murderer living free with no problems, and what seems like no justice has been served.
Also I entirely disagree with the first part. Sure it would've been helpful had her child been raised better, but I don't believe in Victim blaming when they have never done anything aggressive to that point. They've been expelled, they were caught and they had their previous punishment as course for what they've done. That does not excuse anyone's murder, as nobody should choose that option to end someone's life because of harsh words!
OK, i just want to say, Like many others, i have read this series since the beginning. I want to say that you are quite an amazing person. To be honest, this series is better written than the hunger games, or Harry potter books. I really enjoyed this, and can't wait for the new chapters to come out. trust me when i say these things.
I've shed tears many times while reading this... i feel like its a movie, rather than a fanfic. At the beginning, for "Secret life of rarity" I remember you saying you weren't trying to make a cupcakes sort of thing. Well, it certainly didn't turn out that way! It's actually much better then cupcakes...
Well, I think I'll write to Eqd about this series! I might even fight a little to make sure this series is featured! But overall, I love your work and your beautiful description of your stories. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! ITS ALL TOO AMAZING! 
2274819 I'm honored that you think so! TPLoSB got into the featured box here. EQD didn't want to take The Secret Life of Rarity because of how violent it is, but I didn't try with the other two. Do feel free to write them about it. The posted Cupcakes because enough people asked.
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I agree with you 150% on how a lot of this is DT's fault.
But the thing is, of course she was willing to kill blossom in front of S.B.
Think about everything that's happened to her lately, and now, before she can even get the chance to heal emotionally, she walks around a corner and see's the person that (based on what she was led to believe) murdered her kid.
Not only that, but the murderer is walking around in a state of pure bliss as if nothing happened.
And said murderer is standing only a stones throw away.
It's the ultimate insult.
Now how many people do you know of that, if put in DT's situation, would walk away and pass up the chance to settle the score with the (supposed) murderer of the one person that litterally meant the world to them?
But again, this all falls back on Celestia.
She should have known better than to invite DT to stay in the castle.
So can DT really be held reesponsible for her actions?
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I can agree that it was a wrong place at the wrong time moment with Diamond Tiara spotting the two, that in most ways was Celestia's fault for not thinking (Something she doesn't really do much in this series).
So yes, I can agree on the mindset not being a perfect setting for this, but mindset or not she was being dangerous towards a child and should still be arrested. What her punishment will be, up to anyone's guess. I would just jail her for a few days, put a restrain order on her and put her through counseling.
In the case of taking both the murder of the foals, I think blame goes on both sides. Blossom killed, there is no excuse for that and she does deserve punishment (Not death, cause that's too extreme. Rarity I can understand cause she was a serial killer and beyond redemption at this point, Sweetie Belle "punishment" for all it's worth is fair in my pov if she did kill the foals. That was Third-Degree murder and you don't give the death penalty for that. Maybe life in some cases or really long jail time, but not death.
However, the fact that she was previously bullied by the two, encouraged by one of them to do so in some sort of revenge, and cornered by them that made her think she was threatened should be played into effect. I do agree that in some cases of murder the fault is on the murderer only, but in other cases blame falls on both sides in various circumstances.
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Don't worry.
You have my trust.
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Yes, Celestia really hasn't been thinking at all through this series. She's been thinking less logically, and far more emotionally. Which has clouded her judgement in many of the cases. She hasn't thought things fully through much whether it be emotionally, logically, or even based in common sense.
Course I could say the same for a few others, I still want Twilight to be punished for how idiotic she was in letting Rarity go free and still fighting for it all.
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No, I agree with you on there. It's just a moment of bad timing and place mostly on fault of Celestia.
I'm not saying that DT deserved to lose her child because of her bully actions, but she does deserve to realize how her actions helped played a part of this because she couldn't let go of a grudge of a childhood fight. There is a lot of grey in this story and DT is one of them, you hate her for her attuide and actions, but at the same time she lost her child, something no mother should go through, and that is sad.
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To be honest, the thing that pisses me off about Celestia is that she could have helped Sweetie Belle a lot more in my opinion if she made a public statement in Ponyville after Rarity's execution saying that in no circumstances were Sweetie Belle or her family responsible for Rarity's actions and that they shouldn't be treated like criminals themselves. And maybe if the town realized that then they would have treated her better growing up and maybe she would have had a better childhood/teenhood.
Of course chances are that wouldn't work because it's "human nature" to blame something.
Another thing that I'm wondering about is do ponies believe that Sweetie Belle "did the murders" because she was insane. It's not an impossible thing to think given the circumstances, she saw a psychologist and had learned he sister was a killer at a very young age, not to mention the emotional and verbal abuse she received growing would make anybody just crack.
I'd be interesting to see further split of Equestria on who they believe is the murder: Sweetie Belle or Blossom and how that will escalate. What will the other CMC and Mane 6 think if they are given the thought that maybe Sweetie Belle framed herself to save her daughter?
2274899 One of the main points of this series is how Celestia isn't perfect. We've never seen her deal with serial killers in the show and obviously executing Rarity and disowning Twilight did a number on her emotionally. You all saw how she cried in the police station. Are her actions always lawfully justified and does emotion cloud her judgement? No in the first, yes on the second. Yes letting DT roam free was a mistake in hindsight, but how was she supposed to know that DT was going to consider murder? You pretty much hit the nail on the head in terms of DT's emotional state and reasoning. If she found Blossom just reading in a library she wouldn't have tried to kill her, but it was the fact that she saw SB with Blossom acting happy that made her go nuts.
In terms of Celestia, seeing as how murder (particularly the kind that leads to this chain of events) is so rare in Equestria, I'd imagine that she hasn't had the experience to emotionally center herself during these kinds of events since they're so rare, particularly since they're happening to those close to her. It's my headcanon that she was pretty distraught about having to banish Luna to the moon and I applied that to this.
2274923 Read chapter 15 of Sweetie Belle. Celestia did make a statement saying that Sweetie Belle, her parents, and the remaining Elements were innocent in Rarity's murders.
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Oh, my mistake
I swear, I squealed when I saw the update, and I wasn't disappointed. Keep it up!
I love you.
On the one hand I can't help but feel for DT and SS, no one deserves to have their child brutally murdered like Fire Ruby and Golden Necklace were, than have photos of their bodies plastered all over the newspaper by media vultures .
On the other, if Tiara had just left Sweetie Belle and Blossom alone and not thought hers and her friend's kid to act hateful none of this would of happened.
This is the culmination of a lifetime of emotionally tormenting others and training her child to do the exact same thing, and honestly, I can't feel bad for Diamond Tiara. Which sounds cold and awful, but this is a character that spent most of her life making the lives of others hell (constant bullying/emotional abuse is bloody well serious, I think we've read about enough children taking their lives because they couldn't handle it), especially after the events of The Secret Life of Rarity and the fallout on Sweetie Belle. Your actions have consequences. Sometimes those consequences result in other people getting hurt. But we shouldn't pretend like DT is the innocent party here. She didn't ask for her child to be murdered, but through her actions that situation arose.
I am incapable of feeling bad for DT, so this was pretty satisfying to me.
I kinda hope she doesn't get conveniently freed or deemed innocent or anything like that.
2285574 Yeah well when have you ever gotten feels from this trilogy?
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Rarity's execution, Trixie and Gilda's death, Flim&Flam, Sweetie Belle attempting murder as a foal. Though that last one was more of irritation then 'feels'.
Oh, and Rarity during the entire fight with Iron will and the following scene. All really great moments. Oh, and the psychologist, that too...
Considering the dramatic moment here, wouldn't something like italics for emphasis, or, say, full stops or ellipses improve the situation?
2286396 1. Hmm... I did not know that many bits gave you feels. But Silver Spoon being upset did nothing considering she's pretty much the only one in this whole story really innocent of anything (aside from being spineless for too long).
2. I'll add something. Nice call.
Diamond Tiara finally gets what she deserves after all the years hm? Sweet justice.
Wow, I can't believe how spot-on I was
I didn't think DT would actually try to kill Blossom, but the story definitely developed well here.
Also, would someone pick up that phone? BECAUSE I F*CKING CALLED IT!!
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HAHAHAHAHA FUCK YOU TOO TIARA GO BUCKING DIE YOU WORTHLESS BITCH!
I know I'm not the only one who thinks this, but I'll say it:
YES! THAT BITCH TIARA FINALLY GETS WHAT SHE DESERVES! I HOPE SHE ROTS IN THE DUNGEONS!
that will be all
Oh justice of 20+ some years of torturing Sweetie Belle has been served
Can we have a Silence of The Lambs one next?
The moment I read this:
My blood ran hot and I was like: "Oh you
B***!"
The more I read, the more my blood burned.
Then Blossom stood up for herself and I went: "You go girl!"
It went better than expected.
Just so you know, imo, the responsibility of the murders of the two foals rest primarily on the shoulders of Diamond Tiara, secondarily on Silver Spoon, and thirdly on the three foals. They were driven to their acts by Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon and pretty much only acted as proxies of the aforementioned main two. They WANTED Blossom to be as evil as Rarity was.
Even though Silver Spoon realized her evil in the end, she was still at fault till that point in time.
Nice Aliens reference.
2633255 its funny, when blossom took the table, I thought she was going to send it flying at DT
that waould have been... bad
And just when I thought you had already taken all my feels, you go and pull this chapter. You are relentless
Thank goodness SB isn't getting punished
But I cant help feeling Rarity brought all this pain and suffering on SB and JB
I shall read on
I love that I got the same joy as your last story seeing that Diamond Tiara was beaten up again!
Forget what I said about sorta feeling sorry for Diamond Tiara dealing with the loss of her child in the previous story, I hope she rots in hell! I'm just sorry Golden Necklace's mother ended up being Diamond Tiara.
The dialogue in these last few chapters is almost painful to read. I think you should really take another look at them, because they really need some help.
I felt a bit sorry for DT until now. Silver Spoon still has my pity though.
DAMN IT SHINING KILLBLOCK!! LET THE BITCH DT DIE!!!! NO REMORSE!