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I am just a random brony...that means don't look for me. I like writing stories, so if you don't like it than wait for the next one. It might be better.
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How can you put emphasis on one letter of a two-lettered word?
As above. Uh... GoOH!
What kind of question is that? 90% is straight from the episode. Of course we want more!
Um, I think everybody saw that coming.
Let's be completely fair; Sombra was Dangerously Genre Savvy and it took a whole dose of luck that he was defeated in canon. This fic should take into account that Sombra's genuinely one of the smartest characters in the show; something that easily makes him the most dangerous villain yet. Hopefully, he doesn't turn into an Evil Overlord cliche in this fic.
Of course, some blame should fall on Celestia as well; for making the attempt to defeat what was essentially the pony version of Sauron into a test, of all things, and then sending six relatively inexperienced civilians into pony Mordor.
(Joke) Alt. Title: Fallen, Yes I Have Fallen, The Tragedark Coming At Both Ends
Not bad but to be fair it's not Twilight's fault that Sombra won. If anything Spike is going to feel like it's his fault.
I would like to see more and I think it might be intresting if Celestia and Luna have to get involved.
This chapter feels extremely brief to me, with most of it having actually happened in the show. I'll wait to judge until the story has more meat to it.
Nice start!
To all that are saying that it was too short and too much of it was in the show-I was thinking of scraping the whole idea and deleting the story, if at all possible. Sorry for the miss-communication(why can't I spell?).
Please continue!
I'd forgotten all about this.
But now it seems like Rainbow Dash has gone back in time to the first time a crystal pony staged a rebellion. Probably not the case though.
still good