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Luna Scratch'd

Octavia and Vinyl go to a musical gathering for ponies across Equestria and end up meeting Princess Luna. As the night goes on. Vinyl departs and Princess Luna follows her and ends up having the best night of her long life.

Critique me if you want to. It's my first story.

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Darklordtheslayer

Darklordtheslayer #1 · Feb 22nd, 2013 · · ·

This is pretty good, a few grammatical issues here and there and some sentences seem to have some words missing. Nonetheless this was a good read.

blastdragon

blastdragon #2 · Feb 22nd, 2013 · · ·

This looke like it's getting pretty interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter. Like said before, a few spelling issues but to tell the truth I wasn't distracted by them. Write on!

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