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Starfall is a pegasus with a past he would rather forget, and a future that does not appear to even exist. His only true talent is a gift and passion for the stars and the night sky, a passion he has cultivated since he was a small colt. So when he learns of a chance to make this hobby a lifetime career, he travels all the way to Canterlot, desperate to make something of himself.

But during this opportunity, Starfall talent for reading the stars draws the attention of several ponies, including Equestria's royalty, and the alicorn who created the night sky he is so fond of; Princess Luna. What had started as a chance for a better life turns into an opportunity he could never have imagined, as the Princess of the Night begrudgingly takes him under her wing, teaching him all there is to know about the night.

But as Starfall adjusts to this new world he has been thrown into, complications rapidly begin to arise. Can the young, introverted pegasus learn to cope with the fame his new position will thrust upon him? Can anypony break through his defences, and bring out the pegasus he was always meant to be? And can he keep a secret from the Princess of the Night herself, as his feelings threaten to run away from him?

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Comments ( 285 )

This is here?
Awww YEAAAH!

I Second that notion, fimfic has a much better tracking system!

Good luck here mate.

Woot! You finally started posting your story here, dude! ^_^

Cannot wait to re-read it again! :pinkiehappy:

I really enjoyed this on fantiction.net thanks for re-posting it!

MOAR!:flutterrage: *Ahem* I request more please.

If this is already written, what with the long jump between some of the chapters?:rainbowhuh:

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You'll have to forgive me for that one. I'm not used to re-posting my stories, and as such it slips my mind, especially since I'm struggling to find the inspiration to work on some planned ideas for other ideas. Basically, my mind is elsewhere, and hopefully this reminder is the kick in the flank I need to post a bit more frequently.

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Hehe, the story is good so far. Can't wait to see where it goes!

Also, is the story completed, or are you still working on it?

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The story is completed, yes. Don't worry, the story will unfold quickly...now that I've been given a reminder that there are people interested in this who haven't read it elsewhere, I'll be posting a chapter every day or two.

:yay: for Luna, She gets a student!!

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I will be holding you up to your promise. :rainbowdetermined2:
or else .................. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

So Luna Shipping?:duck: Yes?:trixieshiftright: Please?:pinkiesad2: Luna/Starfall?:twilightsheepish: Okay? Yes? C'mooooooon! :raritydespair:

Ohai Chaos! I betcha can't guess who I am! :pinkiehappy: Hope everyone likes this story so far...otherwise I'll have to get my handy-dandy brick chair :pinkiecrazy:

And so it begins...:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: (the apprenticeship, not the story:twilightblush:)

Have you submitted this story to any groups?

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No, I have not...and I will admit I have no idea how those work...I'm very new to FiMFiction and still wrapping my head around most of it.

Oh so you decided to post this on here? Neat :pinkiesmile: Just to let you know... this was my favorite for a while:pinkiehappy:, but then I read Green.

um so is this a luna romance thing or is starfall going to end up goin for somepony else cuz im shootin for luna.
luna is best pony:rainbowwild:

This chapter really resonated with me, because I had a physics teacher who was exactly like Luna is behaving toward Starfall. (Except for the whole raising the moon thing. He didn't do that.) I remember once having to resit an exam, and I was the only person doing so - so it was just me in this empty exam hall, and my physics teacher watching me from the desk in front of mine. For one and a half hours. It was REALLY uncomfortable.

I read this on fanfic and I recommend it. It works well and flows right along it is well worth your time.

Great chapter! Wasn't expecting to see Derpy, but she's certainly welcome ^^

2210195 I think I might be able to post it in a group if it hasn't been already. If your ok with that... and if its possible. I think it is, but I haven't tried anyone else's stories before.

Hey so legit question did you write this before or after sleepless in ponyville episode?

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Most of it was written WELL before Sleepless in Ponyville. I actually started this story when Season 2 was still airing, just before "Hearth's Warming Eve". I was still writing when "Sleepless in Ponyville" aired, too. Ultimately, the idea started the day I watched "Luna Eclipsed"...Luna will always be my favourite.

good to see this slowly come together over her

Yes I read this before I'm glad you are posting it on Fimfic :raritystarry::rainbowwild::yay:

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yeah i was just wondering that because starfall mentioned that he was glad that luna couldn't see his thoughts and well in sleepless in ponyville we all learned that she very well can in fact she also knows what everypony fears most in the world
but yeah man Luna be the best pony of all ponies! freakin solid:moustache:

I'm likin this. this is good very enjoyable I'm excited to see where this goes:coolphoto:

It turns out that starfall really is an assassin sent to usurp the royal family:eeyup: I just know it

read this on fanfiction and loved it insta fave

Found it on Fan Fiction, and I still believe it is easily the best romance I have ever read... And that's really saying something, as I almost only ever read romance. Again, I say BRAVO! But this time, with mustaches. :moustache::moustache::moustache:

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Well, it's likely that Luna can't enter daydreams, but I had the same thought when I read that. Luna entering a fantasy about herself would be amazing. XD

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See thats the funny thing about the subconscious we have tons of dreams every night but we're lucky:ajsleepy: if we remember even one so chances are if it was a daydream than it was probably a night dream first and if it wasnt than its going to be:applejackconfused:, just remember everypony your mind is an asshole:twilightsmile:

I really liked this chapter it was nicely written:coolphoto: though i'm interested in learning more about starfall's past even though i'm quite sure you've already written one for that as you keep alluding to it :derpytongue2:
anyways quick change you should probably make:

That evening saw Starfall approaching Princess Luna's study with more nerves than he had ever had since he had first become her student.

Your first sentence sounds really off

Agh wheres the next chapter i must read it! I got to that point where i must continue!:raritycry:

So yeah i couldnt take it anymorei had to keep reading and looked up this fic on where you originally posted and i looked and saw you had over 50 chapters and i was like shit im gonna be here a while

this is a great story, please keep on posting more chapters here!

I would wager that Celestia already knows.

ooooooo dang! Exposed but in least it was bit more natural than cliche like- I LIEK YOU!

Ouch, Luna even though if shes doing well in learning moderns time stuff shes still stuck in the Old Times.

Read the whole thing on Fanfiction.net. Awesome story. ^_^

Starfall could not conceive how his situation could possibly get any worse.

Don't tempt murphy...you'll regret it...

'cause it can always get worse.

You know I've been reading ahead and I'm not going to spoil anything for anyone but i just wanted to say is that reading through it when it comes to depicting the mane 6 it think you've done rarity the best she seems almost spot on in the way you write her:raritystarry: which I like cause next to luna Rarity is one of my favorite characters
I know in my own fic I feel like I'm having trouble doing the mane 6 right my editor tells me their fine but i can't help but feel their a bit off in the way i write them anyways i'm like up ch. 37 now and i've enjoyed the series thus far:eeyup:
Do you plan on writing any new stories any time soon?:duck:

I see what you did there. :trollestia:

Although I don't know if you did it on purpose...

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I can't tell you if I don't know what you're referring to? :rainbowwild:

2264252 I'll PM you, so I don't spoil anything.:twilightoops:

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