YES. FINALLY.
Edit after reading: YEEEEEEEESSSSSSSS!

Well this should be interesting. It's nice to see someone else doing a little in the Equestrian Wasteland. Oh and just a tip but if i were you i'd add a little thanks to KKat at some point near the the top or the bottom, just good manners.

Intriguing

Oooooo.
Groovy.

Read, faved, rated in no time.
Welcome to the Wasteland.

It was even rumored that she had killed a Brute in hand-to-hand combat once, though she always says that she got lucky.

Methinks this should be "said", as it doesn't seem like you're going for present tense in this story.

Wait... what? No just no... Humans in Fo:E is bad enough... But Spartans... I know that no idea is wrong or stupid... But this is maybe stretching it to much

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Cough* They're ODSTs it's in the title*Cough

Definitely interesting. I'm going to be watching this, but I'm on the fence, so... yeah. Good opening though, and good writing, so keep up the good work, mate.

See you next chapter.

To this day, many hold the sangheili heroes of the siege in the same high regard as Captain Keyes and Sergeant Johnson.

Same here, except "Held" this time.

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Spartans... ODST poteto potato. Are they in futuristic armor and coming from the Halo franchise, yep. So can´t see the big difference in that

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Well you actually got it!
SPARTANS are super soldiers 3 times bigger than normal humans and are trained from their birth to become commandos and have to go under extreme augmentations.

ODSTS are the futuristic SWAT and are basically normal humans.

Can you see the difference Mr.Almighty?

This is fan-fucking-tastic

A double crossover. You, Sir, are awesome.

...mind you, I never followed the FO:E storyline, and I'm still waiting for Halo 3 to hit the PCs. In short, I won't be reading this.

2073917 halo 3?

without even reading it I fav'ed this story.

2073649 His point is that he thinks ponies, Fallout and Halo should not coexist in one story. Just accept that and move on without trying to tear down the factual errors.

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NO.
Never. I must tear him apart.

I wish to read, but before I do, I ask is reading Khat's Fallout: Equestria required reading?

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*blink*

I did not expect that.

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Look normally I'd agree with you personally I hats Halo with a burning rage. But there's not enough FoE crossovers and at least it's not another "Courier gets shot and gains amnesia," or "Broken water talisman," which are just retellings of New Vegas and Fallout 1. I agree Halo is a over hyper FPS with a faceless one dimensional main character that started the FPS craze (it also pisses me off that they said they were done then said F*** you we're making a new trilogy but that's beside the point). Halo had real potential for great story and maby some of it will show.

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And you just because someone doesn't know the difference between some fictional character class doesn't mean you need to tear them apart Doomanade is one of the greatest Pre-Readers in the FoE community just because he has a different opinion doesn't make him bad show him a little respect. He's allowed to have an opinion.

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Tear him to pieces! Feast on his flesh! DRINK HIS BLOOD!

BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!!!
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!!!!!!

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Yes, Halo 3. Both Halo 1 & 2 had PC releases. Halo 3 did not. As such, I have not yet played Halo 3, ODST, Reach, or the recently released Halo 4.

(Joke) Alt. Title: Spinoff Equestria - HALO 17: And All That Could Have Been Shouldn't Be

2074148 ha that sucks man you should borrow a xbox from a friend or something

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I wasn't saying that he cannot have an opinion. I was just pointing out the difference. And yes, it does matter. If someone makes a crossover, it only makes sense to do a little bit of research. Especially if it's one of the most selling AAA games.
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SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!

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My friends are either die hard Nintendo or Playstation fanboys, and are shocked that I own both a PS3 and a Wii.

Suffice it to say, none of them own an X-box.

...also, thanks to "Growing Up", we all live in completely different parts of the state at this point. Thank God for Friendcodes and PSN.

2074212 k then buy a xbox

Tentative favorite, wanna see this succeed.

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LET THE GALAXY BUUUUUUURN!
(I can't help but join in the 40k quote chain. I'll post something relevant to make up for it, I promise.)

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Did you hear that? That was my tau sniper you Chaos scum, your gods have no power over me and my kind. For the greater good of cake!

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Sure tear me apart for saying my opinion on the interweb. For not having played an FPS and then still have shown interest and have learned something about the setting the game is in. But you are more than welcome to go away from your Halo franchise and over to my world of Fo:E.

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No. I do not think that humans, and especially not your typical spacemarines should have anything to do with the setting of Fo:E. I can not see in a million years what they are doing on Eques. "We have an world that have been burned more or less to ash more places, ohh lets go there, there is apparently lifeforms that can live in that" Said no one ever.

Fo:E is not just fallout with ponies after all. It is an blend of those two settings into an fine mix. Into something better than both the things it came from.

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Okay sorry my bad... So we have super spacemarines and normal ones... Still can´t see what they are doing in the Fo:E wasteland, sorry. I know now that I apparently made an little mistake in how OP they are compared to an wastelander, but they are still spacemarines from outer space no matter what tec you give them.

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Me neither. I was prepared to something like this. Sure someone pointing out that I was wrong and so on, but in an civil tone at least. But to maybe better understand my opinion. I have not played halo, any of the games, but I have played my share of Fallout, and read my share of fallout stories, and sorry to say it, I can simply not see how an spacemarine are fitting into this. Yes there is the Stars, and some side stories that say that the stars is aliens, some is even saying that the aliens is humans. Yes there is star metal and a lot of lore about something bigger out in space. But it is normally not touched by anyone. And to then fill the space of the Stars with big humans from an franchise that is quoting the bible with the naming of the characters and hiding other small things... Sorry I can simply not see it happen.

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It is not because I hate Halo, I have not played the game, so I have no opinion on it yet. I do just know my Fo:E lore and can not see any room for any spacemarines in it. And beside that, with over 400 stories is there sure someone that don´t is about water talismans or amnesia, I know that is many without them

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MAIM, KILL, BURN!

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Considering that I'm only working part time currently, I'm having a hard enough time saving up for a Wii U and a Vita as it is. I'll be lucky if I can get one of the two by next Christmas.

2074289 ok im done helping because you clearly don't want help i say good day to you

It is... well written, yes.

But just why did it have to be Halo!? As in, the second most loathsome thing after Modern Warfare?

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It would help immensely. You should do it anyways because it's a good story.

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God damnit. I am not saying that you should piss off because you have an opinion. I am just saying that ODST and Spartans are 2 different things.
And sure, maybe this is the worst combination for a fic but you have to look on the bright side. Gyvon is pretty skilled in his writing, so there is a good chance that he can make it into something not as generic.

Also I don't really want to read the original Fo:E.
And I'm not a bloody Halo fanboy. I only own one game from the Halo series. And that was only because I wanted to prove myself that buying an Xbox wasn't a waste of money.

2074268 Tau? TAU?! *Maniac laughter* You thing they can stand a chance against the legions of the Ruinous Powers?! Oh gods... Next you're going to say that the Tyranids can curb stomp either a) A full on Chaos invasion. b) A fully activated Necron Tombworld.
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That aside, I noticed that you say 'spacemarine' a lot. And I do mean a LOT.

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Why would you want to read an side fic, if you don´t want to read the original? I know that there is some good spin-offs to anything, but is it not best to have the knowledge of the original so you don´t miss jokes and what not?

And I can´t see how an Xbox360 wasn´t some kind a waste of money. And I have all 3 consoles and a pc. You have to pay to play online, something free on all other machines. Sure there is some exclusive titles, but the other machines does also have something only they have. But that is my private opinion.

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Yep I say spacemarine a lot, because the last few times I tried to put an title other than that on the human soldiers have someone hit me in the heard with that I used an wrong therm. And I know for a fact that all the human soldiers I have seen from the Halo franchise can be called spacemarines, so there is your reason.

And the 40K question. Since your army have an newer codex right now and such, then no. Right now can Tau not do so much... Beside being babysitted by the Smurffs that have found an scroll in there old archives telling them that they have to

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I know there's a lot of non amnesia or water based ones look in my faverites heck look in my stories I've favrited every FoE story (I used to track but I have to faverite to track now) and I'm not even saying all stories with them as the plot are bad I'm just saying there's a lot of them. It's more then a clechea at this piont. So some new blood might do us some good heck one of my stories is a crossover with Kingdom Hearts. (also sorry for misspellings this is being written on a Kindle which by the way has over a hundred FoE stories on it)

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I read the wiki lore, it's easier.
Alright, look. Let's bury this battle axe and roleplay Warhammer in the comments.

BRING IT ON MOTHERFUCKER! MY BODY IS READY!

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*shrug*
Newer codex is best codex.
...
I do approve of your opinion on the consoles though.

And you have no idea how hard it is to suppress my inner grammar Nazi. It just hurts my head.

Hate has been detected. Will commence firing sequence of OFC in 10...9...8...

Seriously people, Halo and Fallout are both great franchises. They have differences, big whoop
Let's not start a flame war here. That goes for all of you.

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I did not know that there was any chainaxe to bury , but sure let the two of us bury one.

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:shug: I am foreign so there is your reason to all the mistakes, and just release the Nazi, I can take it. The question is just if I fixes anything after the Grammar Nazi attacks.

2074403 I rather not unleash the Grammar Nazi. He tends to get... Creative... With the death threats he makes.

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*butts into conversation*
You should see me. Few hours ago while I was working on an essay for school, I had to rewrite several sentences and one paragraph. Then I got a headache. So I decided to man the hell up and power trough it, not even bothering to look at the aspirin pill next to me.
Eventually (30 minutes ago) it stopped and I still have a nice aspirin pill for sleep.

I like getting involved into other people's private spaces.
SPAAAAAAACCCEEE

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My handler doesn't even allow me to do creative writing essays! She says I either waste too much paper (because they get HUGE, and I get a little overboard with my need for perfection), and since it's basically a competition of who can get the best one, mine would completely annihilate the rest of the class. Being a foreigner with way-above-average English knowledge, at least where I'm from, can get scary for her

And I too like to butt into other's privates. *wink wink*
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!

Before I even read a word of this story, I joyfully and enthusiastically endorse its premise. Dropping "Helljumpers" into the world of FOE is full of win and awesome. Now to see if you fulfill the possibilities.

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Oh wow. You are basically me.
I am basically on top of the English class for me and the rest of the class sucks.
Well almost always on top. I can write but my Slovac tongue keeps screwing me over. My tongue was developed to be able pronouce hard and deep words.
Hard and deep, hehehehe. So immature.