A changeling is taken prisoner after being thrown from Canterlot. The ponies don't know much about the changeling, and viceversa... once everything comes to light, what will fate hold for the little worker?
The chapter was pretty good, but that synopsis is way too long and too specific--a lot of that information would better serve if moved into the story itself.
Eh... well, it's just the outline, and there are many things to come... This one is different from my other stories, so I'm testing things out a little. What do you think would work better?
This seems.... Interesting. Can't wait for next chapter!
The chapter was pretty good, but that synopsis is way too long and too specific--a lot of that information would better serve if moved into the story itself.
very philosophical I like, this changling seems to be a deep thinker
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Eh... well, it's just the outline, and there are many things to come... This one is different from my other stories, so I'm testing things out a little. What do you think would work better?