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Twilight Sparkle Doesn't Like Loud Music

Twilight is tired of all the loud music, and she does something about it. Because her man has two jobs. Or something like that. This is just something I threw together because I wanted something to write about. So this fic was spawned.

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Germgod

Germgod #1 · Jan 22nd, 2013 · · ·

Because her man has two jobs

Is that a "Everybody hates Chris" reference by any chance?
This was a nice little story so you a fav from me.
Anyway, poor Twilight,i too know the sadness of having very loud neighbors so i can relate to her in this story,also her library is also bad i guess.

SuperSexyRainbowDash

SuperSexyRainbowDash #2 · Jan 22nd, 2013 · · ·

2002017 Heh, thanks. It wasn't intended to be a reference, but I throw things around without knowing where they came from. So it very well could be I got it from there.

SuperSexyRainbowDash

SuperSexyRainbowDash #3 · Jan 22nd, 2013 · · ·

2003942 Well since you didn't point any sentence in particular out, I'm assuming there's a lot of them.

SuperSexyRainbowDash

SuperSexyRainbowDash #4 · Jan 22nd, 2013 · · ·

2004224 I just put those there because I didn't know what else to put. Sorry if that bothered you.

kamil

kamil #5 · Jan 22nd, 2013 · 1 · ·

“God dammit.”

You mean "Celestia dammit," maybe? Then again, I don't really mind when comedy works sacrifice a cohesive setting in exchange for simpler understanding. It probably just stood out because that was the very last thing in the story. There's also probably an even more lore-friendly curse that would fit better, such as a longer expletive involving specific reference to what is being damned, and replacing the verb with something about banishment to the moon. Just something to think about.

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koenigseggfan14

koenigseggfan14 #7 · Jan 23rd, 2013 · · ·

i loved this! i always liked these short stories because you can read them in like 10 mins. and i was able to do my english homework with this story so thanks!