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Good!!! This only makes me worry.
There's a first time for everything, even for meeting ponies.
I'm in the middle of moving, folks. Glad I could post it today before the net gets cut off. I was afraid it would be before I was finished, because right now I have so little time to work on the story, it's a mess!
Well then: Lots of revelations, maybe for the worse, maybe for the better.
There's no cliche cooler than 'The Past'! Everyone has it and now Tyler has one, too. Seems our infiltrator took a bite of the forbidden fruit and thus jeopardized lots of lives. I hope no one feels offended by this. The leaks DID caused some deaths that could have been avoided, but a guy like Tyler has a point as well. We care too little about humans on the other side of the planet because... Well, we don't see them every day, they are of no importance to us on a personal level. But that doesn't make their lives less valuable. Lots of people lost relatives and friends due to the Manning leak; of course they are angry due to this. And rightfully so. I couldn't say for certain what I would think of a guy like Tyler. I would probably react similar to Rachel. I hope I got both Tyler's and Rachel's opinion delivered well enough. All left to say is that this wasn't a part of his past Tyler was very fond of.
As for the chemical stuff, I hope I got all that shit right and Borielli didn't blabber a bunch of crap. Writing her was fun, though.
Oh butts. They're being separated. This sort of thing fills me with dread. The sort of dread that makes you want to skim the story until the cause has been resolved. Urgh.
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Don't do that! You'l miss all the fun!
5848520 I'll try and stick with it
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Your choice... But be aware that the next chapter is not taking place on Earth... We are taking a glimpse on what is happening on Equis in the meantime.
After that we will have, do I sare to say it? Yes I do dare! a chapter about a girl all alone in the big city...
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You know, if you want to miss all the shenanigans, this is a-okay with me. You are the one abandoning best seamstress.
5848600 It's nothing to do with shenanagans. The feeling is the same I get when I try and read a fallout crossover and it turns out to be a PoE
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Very well, the choice is yours and you're able to make it. If you want to join in later for the grand finale and Epilogue, feel free to wait for chapter 24 to 25.
The course is set, the chapters begun, the awesomeness ensured.
Terminator memes are Total Recall?
Always fun when the GM splits the party. Roll on random fail table. 0,0. Roll on eldtritch horror fail table.
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It's a 6,6. The friends are so doomed. And so is Big Apple. Whosoever read carefully in Chpt 17 might get a clue of what might come as well now. It will be glorious.
Mimesis a Changeling drider.
Someone must have read the "Drittz Do'Urden" books.
Anyway, I hope they will regroup safely when they reach NY.
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Well, I didn't go into detail about the specifics in scientific terms, but since levitation is a very common thing among unicorns (every unicorn CAN levitate to some degree), a levitation hover tank with a unicorn in it will never EVER run out of fuel. That and the fact that the standard crew for that thing currently consists out of Rachel, Sam, Lyra and Vinyl, which makes that one mechanic, one pilot, one canonneer for the main cannon and one specialist for the bass cannon.
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lol dude you don't have to convince me, tracks are better. Every time.
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Yeah, but it'd be really easy for one to lose traction wouldn't it (I doubt the thing would be constantly levitated by one of its crew), since it has no actual contact with the ground. This would prevent it from busting down walls, which tanks have been used for and are very good at. Tracked tanks also have a bigger fear factor, since when one comes the ground shakes and all you can hear is the roar of the engine, while hover tanks just go "vvvvvwwwooo......" and are really quiet, though this would probably lend them an advantage in a situation where stealth is required.
I dunno, it certainly makes more sense to have hover tanks in equestria, especially with the abundance of unicorns, like you pointed out. I just like tracked tanks better.
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You sure love the term white knight.
White Knight:
1) A man who stands up for a womens right to be an absolute equal, but then steps up like a white knight to rescue her any time that equality becomes a burden.
2) A man who Promotes gender equality but practices special privilege for women.
When a woman believes she can do absolutely everything a man can do and better, but when she is asked to lift something heavy as her everyday chore the white knight will come to defend her when she protests.
3) A person (usually a male) who sees the typical maiden in distress, and believes that he can help her. A male version of the "mother figure" that some girls become.
As for 1 and 2... Tyler doesn't do that. These examples usually apply to guys seeking to get laid by doing things for women... With 4 mares, this does not apply to Tyler.
As for case 3...Yes, he is a hero over there and yes, Celestia is a maiden in distress more or less...
But since when was this guy ever a white knight? The Void Being slaughter, the destruction of Dragon Mountain, the utter defeat of the Changelings in the Enclave and on several other locations Tyler proved to be anything but the guy with the perfectly white conscience. He freaking blew up an entire planet just to get free!
Don't get me wrong, I agree with you.
The time for words is long over. Now action has more weight than dialogue. What is unusual to them is the sudden surge of anger, hatred and rage within Tyler. That surge is strong enough to get noticed by everyone, strong enough to alter his judgement to a degree HE might be the villain.
I said it to another reader in a PM, I'll say it again: Amazing things are gonna happen in the story soon, you just wait. The problem I have is to top this stuff again and again...
5848682 you mean to tell me there's only a few more chapters? holy crap dude there's still so much going on, how will you ever wrap it all up that quickly?
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19 - Sirens in the distance, Brothers in arms * PreviousChapters
The music played in the car radio as the van drove along the street.
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As the song continued, the ponies looked silently at the car radio, eyes wide open in wonder.
“This is magnificent...” Rarity stated, “No record, no gramophone...”
Lyra smirked as she looked over to the seamstress.
“Human technology, folks... I told you this is going to be sweet...”
Tyler looked into the mirror and by that, at the girls.
“Well? What do you think about Earth for now?”
Looking outside the glittering lights of the cities, Twilight gently shook her head.
“It's vast. And so foreign. You were right. It's a very hasty world where one can reach so many places in so little time. And with that television set, one can look even further into places you don't have the time to go to. If I could spend more time here, I'm sure I could learn a lot about humans and their many cultures.”
Fluttershy smiled brightly.
“I've never seen so many different animals at once than in that television set. It surely shows many different climate regions you'll have to travel far for. “ She then looked down. “The downside is, one can't touch the animals or befriend them. I would love to see a real elephant. Maybe even an orca!”
Rachel looked over to the yellow mare, a grin on her face.
“Believe me: An orca is nothing you want to have in your close proximity...”
Since the song ended and advertisement started, Rachel switched the radio channel, until she got one with the news.
“...and the amount of bodies in the incident is yet to be announced as official statements claim this to be the latest mass murder in the war against drugs.” a reporter sounding like speaking through a phone. “In the early morning hours, the inn was raided by federal agents and SWAT units and ever since then, there has been a complete lock-down. By the scarce statements from the officials one can assume that everyone who was in that inn is probably dead by now.”
Tyler and Rachel looked at each other from the corner of their eyes before Tyler nodded.
“You see? Twilight was right. When it comes to Changelings, she seems to be always right. I trust her completely.”
The girls shared a group hug around Twilight.
“Saved our coats yet another time, Twi! Good work!” Rainbow stated.
* * * * *
Back in the federal department in Sacramento, Ben and Rick went down the corridor towards their temporary offices. Ben Miller nodded over to Rick, a dry smile on his face.
“Rick, remember the slaughter at that inn?”
Going through the case files while going and drinking a coffee, Rick simply looked over to his colleague.
“You're going to tell me you found some survivors?“
Ben sighed.
“We found one... And frankly he's not so happy about that. Lost his young daughter due to this. I have Catherine having an eye on him, he's able to answer some questions, but we shouldn't expect too much from that poor guy.”
Rick placed the files onto his desk and turned around, facing Ben.
“Well, can you blame him? If I knew I escaped hell you couldn't expect much from me neither, Ben. Even less if I lost someone dear on that day. Let's take it slowly, this should do the trick.” A few minutes later, Rick sat in front of the young man, who seemed on the edge of his seat for some reason. Nevertheless he began the conversation. “Enrico Avelino, age 34, Mexican origin, U.S. Citizen for four years now. Do you like it here?”
Enrico Avelino's breath was shivering and he looked up, his palms sweaty and shaking.
“Am I...?”
Both agents looked at each other before Rick gave Enrico a warm smile.
“Yes, Enrico. You are perfectly safe here. Whoever did this in the inn, he can't get you here. My colleague already told me about your loss. You have my sympathy. We want to get whoever did this. So why don't you start at the beginning? Please tell us all what happened that night. ”
Enrico nodded and took a few deep breaths before he found enough composure to begin.
“My daughter, Maria, had her evening bath and I went to the inn landlord due to the fact that there were peeping Toms at the window. By that time our room was closed and Maria had permission to watch some TV on the bed as long as she wouldn't open up to anyone. I went into the bar a few streets further for two beers. There was a game showing in the TV at the bar. I wanted to make a call, when I noticed my phone wasn't in my jacket. So I went back to the inn to get it. That was about... twelve, I guess. The inn is only two blocks away, so I took my time. However, when it was only across the street, I heard screaming coming from the inn. I began to run towards the parking lot, when I saw...” He stopped in an instant and looked down, sweat running down his forehead.
Rick shot a glance over to Ben Miller before he leaned in to Enrico.
“Enrico... What did you see?”
Enrico's eyes widened.
“That... THING!!!” Looking up to Rick, Enrico's face showed fear. “THAT NIGHTMARE!” The mexican now began to sob. “He... No, IT!!!” More uncontrollable crying followed and Enrico fought to get the words out. “Maria's clothes... in one of its... one of its claws...”
You got this from the slender man documentaries dident you!
Sorry just reviewed my comment I added in the stet of the sotory
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Someone has a keen eye for disturbing videos. It's a clear reference, yes.
5925080 lol I just relized it at the start to, Well anyways great chapter cant wait to see more
Shit just hit the fan!
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you mean like this?
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Could you write title and artist if you don't link a new video?.
(And try to find vevo or official/verified youtube page of the artist/title if possible.)
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That's the unfortunate thing with Youtube... Accounts and videos are not always forever. 😔
Pat Briscoe - Drifting
Ough, these Meet the Team references absolutely kill me, with cringe, and also funny, but mostly cringe