At that moment she had a face that was a strange mixture of confusion, surprise and joy, but before she could voice any thoughts, the voice spoke again.
’Yes, Twilight, the spell worked, but you must calm down.’
Taking some deep breaths she attempted to, at the least, look calm. She spoke quiet enough as to not be heard through the door “You’re right. Calming down is important.” Taking another deep breath, she began to think a little clearer.
“First things first, I need to calm down Spike.”
Before she could make it to the door, the voice spoke again.
’You should put me away first. That way, when you open the door, he won’t have anything extra to ask questions about’ Letting the thought sink in Twilights’ head for a moment the voice continued. ’Is the closet empty?’
This time the unicorn took action. After quickly putting the ponnequin inside the empty closet she smoothed her mane out and took a couple deep breaths. ‘Alright. Let’s do this.’
As calmly as she could, she opened the door to her distraught assistant. Spike then launched himself at her leg, almost taking her out in the process.
“Whoa, Spike. What’s the matter? Twilight asked while quickly regaining her balance.
“Twilight, do you know how long you’ve been up here?” He asked, while regaining his calm
“I don’t know exactly. Maybe a couple of hours?” Twilight asked, wondering where this was going.
“Twilight. You’ve been up here for eight hours, if not more!”
“WHAT?! How could I have been up here for that long?” She began thinking of all the possible things that could have resulted in this much lost time and realized quickly that it was likely due to the exhaustion, the spell put on her.’But to sleep for eight hours. Wow. Didn’t see that coming.’
“Yeah. I woke up this morning to the noise of something hitting the floor. Then, I remembered you saying that you would be working on some project or experiment today, so I didn’t really think much of it. Then, I went down stairs to make breakfast and you didn’t come down. I even knocked on the door.”
’Wow. I was out cold, wasn’t I? Usually just the smell of his cooking wakes me up’ she thought, while Spike continued.
“But you still didn’t answer me. So I figured you were just really into it. I went downstairs, did my chores and looked after the library, but when I noticed that eight hours had passed since I got up, I started to get really worried. So, I came up here and tried knocking, but there was still no answer so then, I knocked harder and started calling your name and, well…Here we are.” Spike finished up his explanation with a large outward sigh. “I was really worried, you know?”
“I’m so sorry Spike” She said, nuzzling the worried baby dragon, “I guess I was a lot more out of it than I thought” At that moment, her body decided to remind her of what she had missed throughout the day with a loud grumble, which quickly lead to a blush of embarrassment. “Heh. What do you say we have a big lunch then?” Spike proceeded to jump at the offer, and rush downstairs with a smile while being followed by a sluggish Twilight, ‘I swear if dragons got Cutie Marks his would be for cooking.’
Sitting down at the table, both of them were currently eating although, Twilight, however, was eating as though starved. She did this as respectfully as possible, with only a few crumbs here and there, when Spikes curiosity finally got the better of him.
“So, what were you doing up there anyway?” This prompted a choking fit from Twilight due to the suddenness of the question, which in turn, prompted Spike to hurry to try and help, only to be stopped by a raised hoof signifying that she was ok.
After hacking a little more, Twilight finally got herself under control enough to speak. “I’m sorry about that Spike. Now, what were you saying?”
“Geez Twi, maybe you should eat a bit slower” Spike said chuckling, which only earned him a roll of the eyes from her. “Anyway, I was wondering, what it was that you were doing that kept you up there for so long. I mean, come on. Over eight hours without a word? That’s a long time for you, even when you’re reading something that you find interesting, you take a food break after a little while.”
This started to panic Twilight a little, since she didn’t really want to lie to her number one assistant, but, she also absolutely didn’t want to say anything about what she was doing in that room. In the end, she figured out how to not do either.
“I’m sorry Spike, but, it’s really personal to me so I’d appreciate it if you didn’t ask any more about it.” Spike looked a bit surprised by this and it showed in the confusion on his face. “I really am sorry.” It wasn’t a lie but it was still hard to do. ‘He was worrying so much, and I won’t even tell him what it was about. Ugh. I feel terrible. Please just let it go Spike. Please, please, pl-’
“Ok, I get it.”
‘Huh?’ Which was eloquently followed up with “Huh?” Even in retrospect she still couldn't find better words for a reaction.
“It’s a mare thing, isn’t it? Rarity’s told me that, if it’s a mare thing, not only do I not need to know, but I wouldn’t want to know.” Spike sat there with a face that told Twilight he thought he’d figured it all out.
‘If that’s what he thinks, I’m not going to be the one to correct him.’ She went around the table towards him and gave him a hug. “Thanks Spike. I’ll be working on it for the rest of the day though, so, you can have the rest of the day off.” The look on his face was near priceless.
“Seriously?! Awesome! Alright Twi, I’ll see you later!” He yelled as he made his way towards the door with Twilight yelling in his wake.
“Just be back in time for dinner at ten!” and with a wave of commitment to the schedule, he was gone.
“Rarity really earned those bits for teaching him that.” She made a mental note to herself to do something special for her friend while she made her way back upstairs to the guest room.
Ok, a quick linking chapter... I'll follow to see what you do with this.
I like the idea, but... this needs a massive overhaul on grammar, pacing, and punctuation.
Also, can I get a dollar everytime I see the word "ponequinn"?
Last thing, is the enchanted ponequin just white? Or does it look like Twilight now?
I'll give this a favorite for now to see where this all goes. I'll hold off on a vote for now though.
1979302 i think maybe off-white (Twilight coat clour but faded)
will the ponnyquin look like dusk shine? make it look like that! pretty please!
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As of now it still looks like a normal ponnequin. (after all the only current difference is that crystal and three hairs in it's head)
Also yeah this is after the first pre read. I'm still looking for someone to go over it once more in more depth. I know computers not grammar. lol.
Spike's cooking is amazing, if every episode but the one that shall not be mentioned is to be believed. The only thing I didn't like was the last two lines. It makes it sound like Twilight thinks Spike is a nussiance to Rarity, even though Spike is constantly helping her in any way he can.
Playing goddess and creating life, not a good plan there Twilight, take it from Bender.
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Oh I see what you mean.
No she earned the bits thanks to the fact that she had instilled the idea of "A Mare Thing" into him preventing him from asking more into the situation which due to how she was acting should be obvious she wouldn't hold out against long.
Also there was nothing to say where he was going although I think you all have an idea already.
But no she doesn't think him a nuicense to Rarity
1981903 Oh, that makes sense. It was just in that position it was... misconceiving. Does make you wonder how that came up
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It's been changed up now.
2027715 Much clearer.
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So I'm giving you guys (and gals) a chance on naming our resident Artificial Intelligence. Give me any suggestions on a name.
Two Things.
It's a she.
Take into mind the little that i have told you about her so far.
If one of the names works well I will use it. Otherwise I have a backup if no one says anything or make troll names. (No HAL jokes please)
2033729 Hmmm.. Maybe Quill Dropper?
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Interesting. Any reason why?
2033772 Well, maybe it's because ponnequins are made out of polymer (plastic), and if "she" touches a thing it would drop... And it can be for both gender...
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By touches, you mean, if she would somehow, get the ability to move and then grab something, it would fall?
2033920 She could drop something at first, but if you make her a unicorn, then she can't have any problem with "touchy" things..... But if she is really going to be a unicorn, at first she isn't used to magical grasp, and then Twilight gave her that name, and then she later on quickly manages to use her magic very well like Twilight. And you can make her personality clumsy. Nerds are clumsy, too you know.
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I'll take it into consideration. It just seems like a kinda demeaning name is all.
Hopefully others have ideas too.
2034030 ok!
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Twilight Floffle
2033729 moonlight sparkle?
and what is "HAL"?
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Alright. New bit I shoulda mentioned.
It is a separate entity from Twilight. Not to mention I doubt she would purposely put a part of her name on something let alone name something like herself.
Therefore, what i'm getting at is, avoid parts of Twi's name.
Also remember to explain why you chose the name you have.
My goodness. This other conscious... It's almost like a tulpa. Be careful Twi! I'm not getting good feelings from this.
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Actually, that might make a good name for it. Tulpa. If not that (and you're still searching for a name), might I suggest the following? TE-1 (pronounced Tay, meaning Thought Experiment-1), Appy (a sort of nickname arising from AP), or perhaps Resonance (as in, what comes off of a sounding board. yeah, it's a pun, but fairly harmless).