SNAPnZAP is just a normal pony, living a normal life in Ponyville. . . and he wants some exicitment in his life, well that's all gonna change when he meets the doctor.
Read to find out what wacky and epic adventures they embark on through time and space.
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"SNAPnZAP"? Seriously? Were the block caps necessary?
...With a rather extraordinary name.
/Opens story.
Ok. This can't be too ba-
Usually a clear sky means that the weather team has been working to clear it. And then "...everypony is having a nice and relaxing" You are missing a word here. And don't overuse ellipses. Start a new sentence.
That is all. So stop butchering canon.
And that's when I had to stop for a second. Lets begin.
Ok. More to come later.
1980157Hi people, i was gonna post a short chapter on this but i decided to make it a comment instead. I just wanted to get a couple of things across... so here i go
1. OK i'll admit the caps was a little bit unnecessary but what can you do, a name's a name
2. Yes, my grammer isn't the best in the world but hey stop cramming it down my throat im learning more grammer in high school right now so it will get better
3. "i have brownish, gold-ish/squints at your profile pic. That colour is more closely related to green yellow,"
I just wanted to tell you guys that my profile pic is not my pony, it's my cousins. my pony is exactly how i described. come to think im going to change my pic soon
4.
I understand it was an honest mistake that you linked them together but dude, i know what im putting in my stories (Except the errors, those are an accident). Darkflyers is a group that me and my friends made up
5.
dude, come on my pony wears clothes! i don't see how that is "butchering cannon".
6. loverfriend was an accident, i meant to put marefriend but the damn spelling check put that instead.
I hope this cleared some things because some of the stuff you guys put really helped and i know now to avoid those mistakes (if they ever come up again) but some of the comments, it wouldn't have killed you to send me a PM or something about the errors.
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1. With the exception of some Scottish names, such as McCoy, in which the Mc means 'son of', the only letter in a name that should be capitalized is the first one, unless you want us to get the feeling of 'hurr hurr, my character is so special,'.
2. Well, then consider this extra education. Because 'capitalize your I' has been drilled into my head since grade... two I think.
3. Eh, coulda fooled me. Blue mane, both described at being yellowish, yep. Take heart that it wasn't red and black and that you managed to make a decent colouring scheme.
4. Once again, from looking off your profile pic it looked like a shadowbolts uniform, so honest mistake there.
5. And just how many ponies do you see in Ponyville wearing clothes? In Canterlot I could see it, but Ponyville, where everyone is in the nude most of the time?
Queer fellow, that pony that wears clothin' all the time.
Also psst, it's canon, not cannon. Canon means that it's confirmed, cannon means the large gun.
6. I'm going to assume, assume, that this was written on a mobile device then, because if it wasn't then I'm going to have to wonder why you clicked on the correct button even though you knew it was correct.