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Yes. Just... Yes. Excuse me as I go cry and laugh in equal and healthy proportions.
Fav, +not enough thumbs, this. Is. Goooood.
That was so sweet!
That was very awesome and well done. I loved it!
Sweet, a SoarBurn fic is always a win in my book
Aw that was so sweet. Right in the feels.
This is so sweet! I loved it!!!
I loved it one of the best ive read i actually almost cried
I can say that this was the first Soarin and Breaburn ship that I've read and I admit, It was quite a nice read.
Well done!
Well done, probably one of the best Soarburn I've seen. I approve
This! Yes, just this. This is the most perfect example of how you write an amazing SoarBurn story. A wonderful job with their confessions, especially Soarin's one. Thank you for writing such a great story.
Corrections issued without malice.
You're
raised (or lifted)
by the accounts
was to come OR was in store. Both is redundant.
were
yourself
past
Braeburn
held his head low
things: for
question should have question mark.
on
or pats
bidding
He went on about how much crop there would be and the income it would bring. Also, "he walked on"
It's not too bad. Ends abruptly and does a bit of telling rather than showing, though.
10/10 would read it again!