Rainbow Dash spends the day with Scootaloo after seeing her feeling down. The two have a fantastic day together and begin to form an inseparable bond. That bond is broken after Scootaloo, Sweetie Bell, and Apple Bloom are kidnapped by a notorious crime mob. Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Applejack decide to take matters into their own hooves and search for CMC and the snatchers. Doing this, they embark on a journey that will take them to the dark underbelly of Equestria's crime system.
Chapters (10)
Looks good. I'll read it.
I agree. I'm looking forward to future updates.
MOAR!!!
I NEED MOAR!!!
This is going to be interesting
keep up the good work.
More please
Great work. Keep it up,
This is getting very good
Quick on the updates, here. A bit disappointing that the chapters range from a reasonable length to less than a thousand words, but this story is progressing quite nicely.
keep it up
Very nice.
inded, very intriguing, cant wait for moar!
Bawhhh...
Winter's so nice...
Now watch him turn on them
~Rosalynn~
lol i am really enjoying this story can't wait to see, well read, the looks on these gangsta faces when rainbow comes in and plays hero
yay new chapter
i love it
I have a disturbing prediction of what they're going to do.
oooooooooooooooooooooooo good! but sad, i likey winter, he so nice
this is going to be fun
...well, that escalated quickly.
First
Now it's fillynapper killing time
lol that was epic
rarity: it was rainbow's idea to add the seducive part
First for this chapter!
"I don't remember saying that you could leave, Winter. All I said was that your services are no longer needed."
Chillingly appropriate line....
And if there are explosions, I like where this is going.
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you'd think that the Princesses would have Laws in Place saying that if any harm comes to the Element Bearers OR their Families, that counts as High Treason in the Equestrian Justice System, Punishable by PERMANENT EXILE!
I wonder what explosive he'll use semtax, mabye classic C4, take a match and some gasoline... choices choices choices...
Hope to see the next chapter soon
Like this story, are you going to continue it?
whens t do you think you'll have the next chapter reedy
Oh no comments, guess I'm the 1st to say
dun DUN DUUUUN
Aw is it dead
just when it was getting good
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Whistles nonchalantly
oh my
very interesting story ngl
THEY’VE BEEN FOALNAPPED AHHHHHH!
intriguing chapter, if I do say so myself
interesting interesting yes
awww winter, what a caring colt
hmmm I’m a bit skeptical
take that you guard
More? please?