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2081470 That one was just staring me in the face and I completely missed it.
I have the brain-span of a five year old. but I can live with that!
Didint read it yet, but need to say this. I. Going to listen to the song from star wars titled duel of fates as I read.
Why did you kill Apache!? Couldn't you have made it so that Claire instead decided to save her AND help her village!?
YES, THAT WAS FUCKING EPIC!!!!!!!
2081669 you read that refrence perfectly, not gonna lie this was the actual song I listened to while I wrote it yet for some reason when I was proof reading it I listened to this song
.... should have added light sabers, eh maybe in a sequel
Well at least all the ponies she killed were avenged.
2081725 DO IT! also I love the Moon + Derpy, if u can please continue that in the sequal, please. keep up the awesomeness that is this story.
Unless one has played MGS3 and finished the game, no one will truely understand how sad this ending is.
You know, I love the refer you made with the end and the boss.
Now you only have to create a changeling that could be a reference to the fear, a griffin for the pain and a Dragon for the Fury. And Apache can return as the Sorrow.
Oh that could be so awesome for the sequel, and this time, you can be like a solo operation where Clare have to do it alone
2081782 well i WOULD be sad if i hadent seen so much shit im immune to feeling any emotion whats so ever so ill take your word for it and say that it was sad
2081994 I'm writing this on Xbox 360, so please read it. Thanks!
Here's the quick version:
The Apache = The Boss
Sargent Clare = Naked Snake
The Boss was Snakes mentor and mother figure. When she defects over to the Russians, Snake is sent on a mission to eliminate the her and at the end he is fighting her in a field of white roses. The Boss tells Snake about her past and the group she belongs to, she explains that she's loyal to the end and her purpose. The fight starts and Snake has to use the knowledge that she had taught him and some newly aquired tactics from his current mission to take her down. After the final blow(giggity... brain really?), she lays in the field dying. She gives Snake her signature weapon know as a 'Patriot'. She has Snake end her and her suffering. A single shot to the head was given and Snakes mission was over. He stood there momentarily mourning over the loss of his mentor and the field of white roses slowly turn into a silkly bed of blood stained red roses. When he returns to america landing in alaska, he learns that his brief love interest EVA turns out to be a korean spy, playing the role of an american code breaker PLAYING the role of Volgins lover/slave(yo dawg i heard you like...nevermind). She explains The Boss' actual purpose behind her mission. Snake goes to the graveyard and walks up to The Boss' tombstone, he places flowers and the Patriot against the grave stone and stands soluting her memory. Small figments of tears apear underneath his eyes and it cuts to credits. If you want higher detail into the amazing game known as Metal Gear Solid 3, play it for yourself and discover much more heart crushing, Spirit raising, Gitter popping stuff. I highly recommend it.So much for the quick version eh?
Dude your hand to hand combat scenes are amazing. I think that you picture it more clearly than most do and write it out well. I like the style they fought in as well, it always kept you on edge as one tried to overpower the other only to cause themselves to make a mistake in their brash attempt to win.
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Very close, Eva was a Chinese spy and the Boss never really defected, she was only fulfilling her mission
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Pretty sure bout that anyway, if im wrong then oh well it is 1:15am
One hell of a fight if I have to say so myself...
2081922 What about the end?
Why does every writer do this? Ooh! Look! There's a really cool character who we thought was a douchebag, but turns out to be not as bad as we thought. Let's kill them off! The Apache could have been the best ally to the Equestrian forces (she had twin miniguns for christ's sake! TWIN MINIGUNS!!), but no. You tucking killed her. I'm sick of this happening in stories.
Why does every writer do this? "Ooh! Look! There's a really cool character who we thought was a douchebag, but turns out to be not as bad as we thought. Let's kill them off!" The Apache could have been the best ally to the Equestrian forces (she had twin miniguns for christ's sake! TWIN MINIGUNS!!), but no. You fucking killed her. I'm sick of this happening in stories.