#3 of the Techorse series. When Rainbow Dash's parents announce they are going to visit their daughter, and expect her to be thinking about settling down, Rainbow becomes desperate to impress her parents. Normally, she would be perfectly fine with being single, but she hasn't heard a single kind word from her mom or dad in years. In order to please them, she gets Techorse to help her out by posing as her husband-to-be! How will this turn out for the two?
Cover artwork by Kirby Fokson: http://fokson.tumblr.com/
Chapters (1)
(Joke) Alt. Title: Mr. And Mrs. Rainbow Smith
The fact that this is not based off of Mr. & Mrs. Smith saddens me for no good reason. No emoticon. I'm just sad.
I didn't find any spelling errors, thank Celestia. It shows you care about your readers.
Since when was Rarity a jeweler? Eh it's not a big deal.
I loved this story. Trying to get your parent's approval never goes away till they die, and sometimes not even then.
I didn't know about your OC or the AU but I figured it out pretty quick
. I do appreciate you writing a guide to keep everyone on the same page.
The only thing I didn't like about the story was it seemed a bit short. It could easily have been more than a one shot, but to each his own. I give it 4/5 moustaches and an upvote.
Wow, this has a lot of down votes. Hmm... let me counteract that. (Upvotes).
Take that, and this, and one of these.
edit: NO TECHORSE! Don't cross the beams!
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Alternate Alternate Title: Rainbow Dash Needs A Green Card
Apparently 8 people don't know a good story when they see one!
Twilight's friendship report was weird though. And wouldn't twilight have already learned not to force a friendship report by now? Overall, great story. 8 people need to learn to see a great story when it's right in front of their face. Now I'm going to leave
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