Celestia and Twillight are making a new museum of sentient Equestrian life. However, they have not been able to find dead changelings with their remains intact. They have discovered live empty changeling bodies, however. Apparently, changelings are not always born with souls inside their slimy little carapaces. The bodies still grow even without nourishment. The changelings have no real use for them, so they decide to use one of the empty shells in the exhibit. However, when going through the exhibit one last time before opening the museum, an odd magical glow brings them to the changeling "statue", which then comes to life. Insane, possibly hilarious, and could-be adventurous things will likely ensue.
currently looking for better cover art.
thank Jypher for fixing the description.
chris andler should be the voice of the changeling
By Celestia, your grammar is horrible!!
And I've just read the description.....
Hmmm, well this is interesting even if there are a few rough edges, wonder how much of his former life he remembers.
1929288 I appologise for my awful grammar in the authors notes of the first chapter.
i don't know why this is rated low it seem cool
1933679
...to say nothing of the description. Just trying (and failing) to read that thing gave me a headache.
I'll hold off reading this until after the next round of edits.
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BUT WAIT! TWO CHANGELINGS! THERE WAS ONLY ONE BEFORE!
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1934981 I aint gotta explain shit. I was actually preparing myself for a bombardment of guesses of who the hidde nchangeling is. there are ten charectors so far. 2 guards, one cellestia, the mane six and the changeling. 8 ponies. 2 changelings, one of them is a spy. (here comes the "THE CHANGELING IS A SPY" GIF.s
I fixed your description. I fixed the spelling and grammar, and rearranged/removed a few words so it makes a bit more sense.
Celestia and Twillight are making a new museum of sentient Equestrian life. However, they have not been able to find dead changelings with their remains intact. They have discovered live empty changeling bodies, however. Apparently, changelings are not always born with souls inside their slimy little carapaces. The bodies still grow even without nourishment. The changelings have no real use for them, so they decide to use one of the empty shells in the exhibit. However, when going through the exhibit one last time before opening the museum, an odd magical glow brings them to the changeling "statue", which then comes to life. Insane, possibly hilarious, and could-be adventurous things will likely ensue.
2012305 thank you so much! have a chicken!
Put it out, now you have 8
2039620DAMNIT! you've put me in a bad position here! I can't! I only have like... 10 minutes before my eyes yell at me to shut my face holes and attempt to sleep! that's when I get all of my ideas (most never get close to even getting a place in my memory.) I might change it somehow when i'm trying to go to sleep! it could make it better!
i ... i.... I'm sorry... I just can't.... 
2039695 my eyes were screaming at me to close them... i put hot sauce in my eyes, have more fan fics to read....
in hindsight wasn't the beast idea i ever had
(Hindsight is always 20/20)
okay first you have a hell amount of grammer and writing errors in your Story. Thats the main reason why people dont like your story.
You also have to fill up the story with more plot. Where did he came from what was he doing before that.
But the idea is reall good. Just too many mistakes you made there.
p.s.: You should get a proofreader
2044761 I'm working on the Plot and such in my head at the moment. and If I can get one, I would love a proofreader. it might actually make me not feel awful about all of my mistakes. I try to fix them whenever I can. I just simply don't have that minor, completely to-common skill. it's sad. really.
2039709 the next chapter is out.
A Men!
well i will folow you and read your new storys then
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2154456 I'm not delaying any more than I already was. I'm sorry, but i REALLY should have waited until I knew were I was going with it to even published any of it.