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You sneaky bastard.
I love it

so you switched it from morose and nun consensual to just roll play?

1912226 Technically, from the beginning, it was always roleplay.

1912307 true but you fooled me pretty good. It definately didn't sound like roll play until this chapter. maybe some one more perceptive would have noticed but I really didn't so good job.

1912320 I seem to be pretty good at fooling and leading people on with my stories. Personally, I feel most of my twists are easy enough to see from space, but maybe that's why they're so good at shocking people because no one expects them!

Wow... I didn't see it coming... And I love it
But I would've liked to se more about this one year transition.

1912387 Maybe later I'll write what happens the following weekend when Spike is on bottom!

Holy buck, damn that was good, a little fast paced but very well made, loved it, you did an amazing job for this story, can't wait to see what else you will create, you have my full attention and support my dear author friend

+= FOREVER!!!

1912338 or maybe it is because you already know the plot of the story and have seen the second part already so you know the signs of the first chapter that would let you know what is really going on.

1912495 That's probably what it is.

1912539 alright then until next chapter cheers

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Oh my Word! This is epic!
It's a pity they have to keep their relationship a secret but................................ it's still cool!

1912943 I never said they had to keep their relationship secret, just the rape fantasies.

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Um.................................
Ok............???????????

1912990 What? What did I do?

1912998 No you did great just keep being awesome and we will support you and your stories!

Most of the downvotes are probably from people who didn't read the second chapter. Can't blame them, there's no hint that everything is perfectly okay until the second chapter. Maybe if they exchanged 'I love you's' at the end of chapter one, that would be sufficient for people who think this is just a rape fic.

I’ll be the dominant master, and you’ll be the very submissive slave.

I want to read that chapter.

1913116 To be fair to those people, I didn't post chapter two until a whole 12 hours after I posted the first one, which was pretty much a full day for everyone to read what was believed to be a standard rape fic.

And I WILL write that chapter and post soon!

WELL...That's just happened!

EXCELENT, i like this kind of fics

I want moar of this lol

I was about to down vote then i read chapter 2.
"Chapter 3--How to train your spike?"
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I was grabbing my pitchfork and torch for a witch hunt, then read this chapter. Fuck you with that mind-fuck. images.firstcovers.com/covers/flash/f/fuck_your_shit-161138.jpg

yay you made me not hate the last chapter.. rape is bad m'kay

the first chapter was rape yes, but at least it fit character rolls, teenage dragons can be needy and greedy, but then i read this chapter and you threw all that all away. this twist deserves a bullet to the head.

I see a plothole. Fix it.

Oooooooh.

I get it!

Um, yeah, this twist doesn't work. At all.

The first chapter was describing Twilight's thoughts; wondering about Spike's behaviour, not knowing if he's inside the library, being surprised to find him masturbating, thinking about how to get away from him, showing genuine fear, wanting other ponies to hear and save her...

And suddenly it was all just roleplaying? Sorry, not buying it. If you had kept Twilight's thoughts better hidden you might have gotten away with it, but it's clear that the first chapter described genuine rape, and this second chapter is just a lousy cover.

So.... It wasn't rape?

wow, that was unexpected. what a twist

?????????????????????????????????????

what?

WHAT??

WHAT???

Huuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Remember Kids rape RUINS friendships.....................unless its consensual role-play rape!

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Twilight smiled a devious smile. “Roleplay, mister. I’ll be the dominant master, and you’ll be the very submissive slave. I gotta remember to get the strap-on dildo and paddle from Rarity, as well as the ballgag and handcuffs” the Unicorn answered.

Nope! I'll end this story right here thank you very much. Good read.

Holy shit

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That's the point of role play it's supposed to feel completely real, and if you just stopped and think, if twilight was actually being raped she would of teleported as soon as her tail was grabbed, and don't say she would of been too scared or needed to think about it she doesn't, she can call that spell and many others​ in a split second

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Her thoughts need to be like that or it ruins the whole fantasy, haven't you ever read a rape role play before?! If she doesn't think like that there's no POINT!!!

My conscience is saved!

Oooooooooooh! They'er just kinky as fuck...Nice!

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Dude some people don't understand basic writing or story telling.