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Love the concept. Way to bland story and short lived.
I know Spike certainly wasn't the greatest rational agent when he was going full dragon retard, but I'd imagine there should be more... reasoning behind him moving straight from jacking it to raping Twilight? The story, for what it is, could be improved by showing more twisted reasoning behind what happened. The ending doesn't quite make sense; Twilight just got raped by Spike. If I were her, I wouldn't be keen on keeping him around, at least until his 'phase' passes by. Why should she be concerned with the event happening again, unless Spike had some sort of leverage over her?
Idk, I just think showing the internal buildup and frustrations would make this read better than just a description of an event.
It took me a minute to realize horn is a verb
1907886 I agree.
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Not usually a rape author, so this was my first attempt at such. Thanks for feedback.
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Yeah, I knew it was too short and lame. I'm going to keep improving on the whole rape thing(wow, that sounds wrong). Thanks for feedback.
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Is it really pedo if Spike's the one raping Twilight?
I've written a second chapter, so I might post that tonight if I feel like it.
1910078 You have peculated my interest and I do look forward to reading the next chapter, if you do indeed post it tonight. How will Twilight respond? With
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You sneaky bastard.
I love it
so you switched it from morose and nun consensual to just roll play?
1912226 Technically, from the beginning, it was always roleplay.
1912307 true but you fooled me pretty good. It definately didn't sound like roll play until this chapter. maybe some one more perceptive would have noticed but I really didn't so good job.
1912320 I seem to be pretty good at fooling and leading people on with my stories. Personally, I feel most of my twists are easy enough to see from space, but maybe that's why they're so good at shocking people because no one expects them!
Wow... I didn't see it coming... And I love it
But I would've liked to se more about this one year transition.
1912387 Maybe later I'll write what happens the following weekend when Spike is on bottom!
Damn, well written save for a few errors and very dark but this is my favorite pairing so I'm always ready to read. Can't wait for more.
Holy buck, damn that was good, a little fast paced but very well made, loved it, you did an amazing job for this story, can't wait to see what else you will create, you have my full attention and support my dear author friend
1912338 or maybe it is because you already know the plot of the story and have seen the second part already so you know the signs of the first chapter that would let you know what is really going on.
1912495 That's probably what it is.
1912539 alright then until next chapter cheers
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Oh my Word!
This is epic! 
It's a pity they have to keep their relationship a secret but................................ it's still cool!
Did Spike just rape Twilight!?
1912943 I never said they had to keep their relationship secret, just the rape fantasies.
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Um.................................
Ok............???????????
1912990 What? What did I do?
1912998 No you did great just keep being awesome and we will support you and your stories!
Most of the downvotes are probably from people who didn't read the second chapter. Can't blame them, there's no hint that everything is perfectly okay until the second chapter. Maybe if they exchanged 'I love you's' at the end of chapter one, that would be sufficient for people who think this is just a rape fic.
I want to read that chapter.
1913116 To be fair to those people, I didn't post chapter two until a whole 12 hours after I posted the first one, which was pretty much a full day for everyone to read what was believed to be a standard rape fic.
And I WILL write that chapter and post soon!
WELL...That's just happened!
EXCELENT, i like this kind of fics
I want moar of this lol
I was about to down vote then i read chapter 2.
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Yes spike I think I can consider you bi now.
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That's pretty much my reaction. Even so, a well written chapter.
OH MY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That's was erotic!
I was grabbing my pitchfork and torch for a witch hunt, then read this chapter. Fuck you with that mind-fuck. images.firstcovers.com/covers/flash/f/fuck_your_shit-161138.jpg
My fetish was the femdom and strapon. I can't say I enjoyed all of this update, but I certainly enjoyed most of it! The use of the word "butt hole" made me cringe a little, though. I would suggest using words we never would have known when we were children and those descriptions would become much more appealing.
Dammit, you're totally beating me to the good stuff considering I'm doing the same thing. :<
This was weird for me, not my kind of thing, but yeah spike, i think you are half gay now xD
We can expect more updates? I was really happy to see this updated.
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I'm not sure why everyone thinks this; back when I thought I was straight I would do that every so often. I guess it's one of those subjective things. Personally, I don't think consuming your own semen makes a straight male gay, or bi, or whatever.
Huh.....the BUCK AM I READING?
Oh well, it's Spilight so I can deal but seeing the mother/son deal *shiver* almost made me back away out of this before I understood it was romance....those two have some crazy ass shit they enjoy though, I need a smoke
Didn't read, but the title made me think of this:
1921578I aggree, although I have never done this. I would think the fact that Spike likes anal penetration would be the thing that would make him bi, not swallowing semen that was put in his mouth by a kiss from Twilight... even if it was his own.
1930135 Again, I don't think Spike liking anal penetration from a strap-on or other similar device would make him bi. I know of plenty of straight guys that liked getting pegged. It's another one of those subjective things, I guess.
1930460never said it made him bi, just ment that of the two things, him getting "pegged" would be the most likely thing to make him bi, not the other way around. Now back on topic. The story was... pretty good. I didn't enjoy it because I'm not into this stuff but from an authors POV it was well done.
1930484 I still disagree, but I can see why one would think that. Thanks for reading even though the content doesn't appeal to you, though.