The Princesses' Guardians

by Badgunz2

Prophecy Reaveled

Aquais' PoV

After looking around and reading the words on the walls of the cave I was able to Decipher something about a prophecy told 1100 years ago. When I did find the actual prophecy on the wall i was shocked at what it foretold. "when old enemies return and threaten the safety of the princesses, two brothers will emerge and...." I read aloud "It seems this is only half it, so were is the other half?" a groan behind me told me that Fergus is finally awake.

"What happened?" muttered Fergus

"A lot happened brother" I said while stepping into his line of sight, which caused him to go wide eyed

"Aquais!? Is that really you? Your A-" Fergus tried to say

"An alicorn, yes and so are you" I responded pointing a hoof at him, and then i proceeded to explain the situation to him and what I had discovered.

one explanation later

"Wow, what should we do?" asked Fergus

"Lets find the other half of the prophecy, but first we should probably head home and either move the house or hide our horns" I stated

"why not ask the princesses for help or advice?"

"Because this has never happened before and the population might over react, remember when Zecora come to town? The whole town freaked out."

"What if we ask to see the princesses alone,while hiding our horns til we are alone?"

"We could try, but first lets head home and get ready"

"Agreed"

So we headed home,which was easy considering that it was almost midnight, so no one was up and able to see us. Once home we got out disguises for the trip to Canterlot, me with a grey hooded cloak and Fergus with a silver colored fedora. We then left a note on the front door for our boss Rainbow Dash, saying that we had to go to Canterlot for business and that we are using some off my vacation time. man I really wanted the bonus for for having full vacation time. After that we went to bed, but quickly realized that we weren't that tired. I decided to read a book, while Fergus laid on the couch complaining about how bored he was. Then a thought struck me, why are we waiting for the morning, Luna has night court, we could go and request an audience right now.I facehoofed after I remembered that and the fact that Fergus facehoofed as well told me he realized the same thing. So we set of to Canterlot, with our disguises, to go ask for an audience with the royal princesses.

Comments

[NightShift]

I have one thing to say. You need to proof read before posting.

One hundred years before Luna's banishment, a prophecy foretold of two brothers and Princesses, but was lost during the rise of Nightmare Moon. Now, centuries later, after the prophecy was lost, it will be fulfilled.

You could get someone to proof read for you, (there's a group here dedicated to it) or you could check it yourself. (I wouldn't advise it, as it's hard to see personal mistakes: I know personally)

Also, while there are some minor errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc., I couldn't help but notice the huge blanks sometimes, and the perspective changing notification. If it is First-Person, keep it to one person, but in an omniscient like this, you can switch the camera focus onto a different character as long as it is Third-Person.

Hope this helped, and have a nice day!

[Badgunz2]

1905200>>1905212 thank you for your inputs, it is greatly appreciated. The details part I will work on (I typed up the 2 chapters from 2-3 am because the idea would not let me sleep).

[Badgunz2]

1905212 also what is the group name that helps proofread?

[NightShift]

1905535 http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=group&group=27