After a series of (un)fortunate events, the stallions Mehrunes Dagon Razor and Daedalus the XIIIth find themselves in the quiet little town of Ponyville where they hope to start newer, quieter lives for themselves. However, as is the case with these two and indeed most if not all of the residents of Ponyville, nothing ever goes as planned.
So sit back, relax, and read on as all kinds of hilarity, friendship, and shenanigans of all kind ensues for your entertainment.
Co-written by RazortheAwesome and DaedaltheusXIV
Authors notes:
We hesitate to call this a self-insert story because despite the similarities in the names, these characters are not actually us. They are fictional characters created by us for the world of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. Seriously, we have almost nothing in common with these characters.
Also this idea was conceived of before the end season 3, so just assume that after the episode "Games Ponies Play" that this series split off into its own timeline.
Pretty Funny, if that's what it's supposed to be, and I do hope that's what it's supposed to be. Still, good story, can't wait for the next part.
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Well that happened. I for one found it enjoyable, but I can tell you now that a shit storm is coming. Your OCs are a bit overpowered (You burned a city to the ground. Brilliant, but overpowered) and the wall of text has been let loose once again. I hope you keep this series up, just try not to make it too outrageous.
Good luck! And don't kill yourself over the 10-20 dislikes possibly coming. I could be wrong, but...
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Oh you have NO IDEA
But yeah. I know these guys are kind of OP but there is a reason for that, and it will get explained in later chapters. For now though, shenanigans. Still thanks man. Comments like yours this quickly give me hope.
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GOOD ENOUGH! Let the madness begin...
I really need to make my own madness pony faces...
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fourth result when I typed "madness pony" into google
Skyrim reference AWAY!!!
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I would get angry but come ON! FIRE!
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Finally got around to reading this, and I like it. Also was "anti-magic field generator" a reference to Dr. Insano?
Huh, now knowing what you two sound like from you dramatic readings I read all you lines in your voices. Now i can imagine Rainbow Dash making fun of Daedalus' muppet voice. (no offence to him obviously)
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When we envisioned these characters, we actually imagined they would sound like this
Razor (Kamina):
Daedalus (Alucard):
[youtube=www.youtube.com/watch?v=5BdY6dWP7k0]
We'll post their character profiles in future chapters.
2213532 Meh it's funnier to imagine your voices, though I hve to say the other guy in the Alucard video with the playing cards sounds like how I imagined Inferno would. Those who haven't read Spawn of Disharmony won't know who I'm talking about.
About time chaps, now onto reading.
Edit: Still Gary Sue, and I still love it! Looking forward to future chapters and I'm glad you guys didn't get caught in a giant hate storm.
And with that, you've locked in a fan.
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Check out my other series
Wake Up. See this. What do?
It updates far more frequently than this since its not a joint project and I'm not worried as much about quality.
So yeah if you don't have the patience for this one check it out.
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Ok, but first I must combat the thousands of updates storming my computer. Weeks of nothing and now this, da fuck FimFiction?
BUT IT WILL BRING ABOUT THE APOCALYPSE!
Yep... you're a first-class psychopath... a lovestruck psychopath, but still a psychopath.