This story is a sequel to Hop, Skip, and a Jump!
Admitting your love can be difficult, but in public, it can be one of the hardest milestones. But in the eyes of someone who shares every ounce of your love, all of that falls away when you're finally safe in eachother's arms. In this short tail, a farmer and the love of her life reveal their innermost thoughts and desires in one public, binding message.
Before the I Do's, what do Applejack and Fluttershy want to immortalize?
Wait... a new story?
Sweet. Time to read.
EDIT: Ok, that was sweet. I really enjoyed reading those quick little snippets, they felt like real wedding vows, even if Applejacks did keep going off on a tangent.
There were a couple sentences with errors that I saw, so I'll just put them in here:
From the first chapter:
(quote)Applejack always knew she'd have a wedding the spring.(/quote)
Should be 'in the spring' or 'knew she'd have a spring wedding'.
From the second chapter:
(quote)She hadn't heard any of it, just as they had agreed.(/quote)
This doesn't make a lot of sense, was she not listening to Applejack, or did you mean, 'she hadn't heard any of it beforehand'?
Overall, good, short, sweet and it adds just a little bit more colour and flavour to your HSJ world.
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Fixed. Seeing as it went without an editor, not too bad.
Why are there no comments to describe the pain in everyones feels over this amazing story? Well I'll be the first. AHEM*Clears throat*
HHNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG MY FEELS!
awwwwww applejack!
loved it
Wow... Really long vows.
[youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=upNd2i58Mns]
Fluttershy at the last couple paragraphs
ARGHH HNNNNNGGG MY FEELS
I wish my wedding had been as heartfelt.