• Member Since 30th Dec, 2012
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Obsidian Overlord


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My shattered perception of reality has beheld the fathomless depths of madness, far beyond the waking eyes of mere mortals, and from which there is no means of escape. 'Inspired by H.P. Lovecraft's weird tales.'

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Wall of text. :ajbemused:

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what he/she said.
But still good~

Yeah, lol. I was going to add some dialogue to make it more visually appealing, but I just don't know what went wrong. :derpytongue2:

Really I like your way of thinking seriously sadistic ... I enjoyed your paragraphs. :pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by Obsidian Overlord deleted Dec 31st, 2012

1876560 @ Muffinpatrol Glad I was able to evoke feelings of uncertainty. I love your profile pic btw. It's like Lyra and Bonbon's response to my story. lol

1879869 @ LoftyParagraphs Thanks for the favorite. :twilightsmile: I'm glad you enjoyed my story.

n.n no prob... and i don't want anything return :scootangel:

Mr. Overlord, your descriptions and portrayal of the inner workings of the main character's mind are just phenomenal! I sincerely hope you continue writing this way, and in the meantime, I'll wear this moustache. :moustache:

1880998 Thank you for the input, and the favorite. You rock that moustache. :yay:

Very nice! I'm a huge fan of Lovercraft and I can see a lot of "Dagon" influencing the story with a little sprinkling of "Call of Cthulhu" in the mix. I've really been looking for this since I feel that while really good at Comedy Lyra has potential in Lovecraftian horror. while not the best example, I think with some practice you can make something truly great. Actually I think you should look at the "The Krastos Logs" since they also have a good Lovecraft feel to them.

Well done mate, the only complaint I have is the slight overuse of "phosphorous" to describe the faint amount of illumination provided by the cave walls.

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