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The Mark of Lightning

A young Pegasus colt's life will forever be altered by a visit to the Everfree Forest. There, he shall find out what his true destiny is...

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Joy Stick

Joy Stick #1 · Dec 30th, 2012 · 1 · ·

"Filly" refers to a young female equine.
Colt is the word you are looking for in the description.
Though rushed quite a bit, it was really good for a first!

MostFaithfulDemonSlayer

MostFaithfulDemonSlayer #2 · Dec 30th, 2012 · · ·

oh, silly me. I knew that, but didn't realize the error. Thanks>>1874633

Joy Stick

Joy Stick #3 · Dec 30th, 2012 · · ·

1874844
you are quite welcome. i'll drop a 'follow' to see where this heads.

Comment posted by IraqLobstah deleted Dec 30th, 2012

Dash Aradele

Dash Aradele #5 · Apr 18th, 2013 · · ·

awesome story and awesome OC, dude! :D

Pump It Up

Pump It Up #6 · Jul 11th, 2014 · · ·

Some tense change errors, I believe, and the unnecessary use of underlining. Other that that, great! I haven't read the sequel, but I feel like a separate sequel is needed; maybe add on chapters to this instead (probably the former would be best).