Another day of work, except that we got work done pretty quick. As I was walking home, I saw some guy with long hair and glasses, wearing a t-shirt with the words "Brony" on it along with a picture of a pink pony below it. I shoved him as I walked by.
"Get a life!" I shouted at him.
Looking back at me for a moment with a blank face, he then turned around and kept walking in the other direction. This was something I'd expect from a guy who likes girly shows. I continued my walk home with a scowl on my face.
When I got to my apartment, it was about nine at night. I sat down on the couch with a sort of dreadful feeling, turning on the TV. I worked late and was hardly ever home at this hour, so nothing really good was on. I switched over to the one channel that always cheered me up when I was younger... cartoons. At least I didn't have an obsession over it.
I'm always a tired person, hardly getting any sleep. Having a bad day didn't help. Pretty soon, I dozed off.
-----
I opened my eyes to a sun shining down at me, straight from the middle of the sky. Blinded by the light at first, I stood up wondering where the heck I was. The only thing around me was some grassy hills and trees. The sky and the air around me felt more clear than I had felt in years, being a man living in a city full of smog everyday. Regardless of the intense light the sun gave, the mood was strangely... perfect.
Regardless of how real it felt, I must have been dreaming. I could have pinched my own arm to wake myself up, but it was too nice of a dream for that. A few feet away from me was a dirt path. As I walked over to it, I noticed a wooden sign to the side. On it, I read the words as "Everfree Forest".
I did the only thing I felt like. Walking.
hater gonna hate..
you should keep on writing this, i would love to see where this goes
Intrigued, tracking 4 stars for good style but lack of plot progression, ill change that vote if i like future chapters
nice job cant wait to see whats next
Hmmm - interesting.... *tracked*
140081
*Claps* That's awesome.
This better end in a dream sequence or the internet will be very dissapoint!
If you want short less then 500 word chapters you MUST update every day, or spend the extra time flushing out your world and charters. Don't for get reasons, emotions, and inner thoughts.
140243 Yeah, I personally prefer writing small little chapters every day than spending a whole week on a HUGE chapter.
Thanks for the great feedback, everyone! I'll be sure to keep on writing!
This looks so interesting! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Interesting so far with only 2 short chapters. I like the idea on what a hater's view of MLP:FiM is and how that view changes over time when he actually gaves the show a chance. Does he have a better understanding of the show and respects it for it is or does he continues to show hatred toward it?