Bo isn't a pony, nor is he a human, he is something more, and perhaps, something worse. How will everypony feel about this new arrival, and how will he feel about them.
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I assure you my friend I have deleted no comments, I myself looked several times for it. I believe the user who made it is currently banned. I wanted to know what he had to say, I love constructive crtiticism. Hope that clears things up.
I like this. It doesn't need as many dislikes as it is getting.
Thank you, it truly means a lot to hear that. I am taking a bit longer on this next chapter to try and improve my style but it should be up by Sunday as promises.
Also in a later chapter there may he a point where I'll need some suggestions, it is FAN fiction after all. I'm thinking a vote will do just fine, guess we'll see who the favorite pony is.
Working hard but 4 may not be out Sunday.
Expect Chapter 4 Tuesday
Sorry for the delay
It's time to vote, at this point everypony is falling in love with our hero, but who is going to be the lucky mare? Let's vote to find out, here are the rules. I will check everyday at 10 pm ET, you can vote for two choices a day(10pm-10pm) but only in one comment a day. Voting will be done with emoticons in the following way;
For Fluttershy-
For Rainbow Dash-
For Twilight Sparkle-
For Pinkie Pie-
For Rarity-
For Applejack-
For Luna-
This will greatly affect the story, so choose wisely.
I know the exact filter you used for the title picture.... huh...
Well, it certainly needs a bit of work, I can tell you that.
If you require any help, just message me and I'll try my best! 
1928570 Im always looking to improve from suggestion. Lay it on me
1928536 It's certainly no secret but I actually used more then one, plastic wrap is the most noticeable though.
This is now officially the first entry in the Chronicles of The Edge series. Please enjoy, favorite and recommend.
Dude wow I mean wow ever need ideas some time come give me a call
2533722 Actually I am planning future entries for this, I'll need more Drames as well as different types of antagonists, but the protagonists are in line.
2536820 Well i'm the protagonists kinda guy so yeah But if you need antagonists I got some OC'S
1# Dragon light he's part dragon part pony like a drake but drakes are part human part dragon am I right?
2# Lighter Oh don't get me started on this guy he's going to be in one of my book when I reales one He a demon god kinda he's a pony yes but he works with anyone evil
3# My fav Dark bright he's a prince but don't let his looks full yah he evil he well he kills pony's he can make himself go invisible Ect. that's my oc's next my good guys
2539396 So my good guys protagonists 1# My first always my fav Burner Blaze duh he's a well Pegasus He can use magic even when he's a pegasus
2# Light bright Dark bright's brother both prince's... anyway they have the same powers except Light bright can blind anyone within a 100 miles except pony's he chooses not to blind yes he chooses
3# Nightstar he was a royal guard until he got poisoned but he woke up in a casket when he got out he all the powers you could get except flight and nightvision and visibility but he's in training he can't even beat Burner Burner's the leader
and these guys are a team called Mursadi's team there Rouge's yes but they help pony's in need
2539459 Reminds me of the Regal Alliance, I started typing up the next one so another prince is on the way.
2539482 Good to know someone likes my ideas not like some ppl
anyway thanks i'm glad you like em 
2539597i don't think it's that people don't like your ideas, with your comments as my only base, your grammar needs a little improvement. Try working up a tale, I'll work my magic and let you know what needs fixed and why, and we'll see if that works for people.
2541500 Dude you rock man *brohoof* /)
You made my day =D
you sure do know how to make a bro happy man you should check out my sis she on here she following me she has not put up a story yet but she'll get there
2542983 Don't worry about it, I started writing young and if someone hadn't given me a hoof I probably would've gave up just as quick.
2543448 Dude this story I read witch gave me the idea of dragon light a pony drake but I didn't comment till after I read your stories dude you the best writer I seen yet except for the guy who made anthropology and maybe series and chaotic harmony but I put you at my number 1# anthro 2# maybe 3# chaotic harmony 4#
2545131 Thanks, writing isn't the easiest thing on the world (look how poorly I balance likes/dislikes on this first one) but with a little dedication and time you can create such memorable moments. Twilight went through 16 different publishers before it actually got published (that more than the fic about it[50 shades of grey{please don't read that, it sucks}])