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The Walking Dead

A pony recently home from the military is thrusted into a world of survival and death after an unkown event causes the dead to rise.

Decided to take a shot at it. I realize it's probably a long shot but hey! Why not!? Please leave constructive coments and tell me what I'm doing wrong and what I'm doing right!
All rights are reserved to AMC and Hasbro. None of what is written about is mine.
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Pixels

Pixels #1 · Dec 27th, 2012 · 2 · 1 ·

*slow clap*
You have managed to wreck my first impression the most any one ever has.
Good job.

Comment posted by Pixels deleted Dec 27th, 2012

LIGHTNINLANDEN

LIGHTNINLANDEN #3 · Dec 27th, 2012 · · ·

Can't tell if thank you......

Thegodhand

Thegodhand #4 · Dec 27th, 2012 · · ·

1859912>>1859908 Neither of those could be considered 'constructive criticism' care to elaborate?

Pixels

Pixels #5 · Dec 27th, 2012 · · ·

1859935>>1859935
Well first, there's the title, where it's shows off its cliche, zombies.
There's the short description, or, well, the lack of one.
And then the author's name sounds like a r&b alicorn.

But other than that, you did well!

LIGHTNINLANDEN

LIGHTNINLANDEN #6 · Dec 27th, 2012 · · ·

I got it from a pony name generator... :-:

Broneys_Are_Queer

Broneys_Are_Queer #7 · Dec 27th, 2012 · · 7 ·

You guys are fucking Faggot Ass Queers that will never get any pussy nor will you move out of your parents basements.
You all need to fucking grow a pair and fucking watch real shit like ADVENTURE TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LIGHTNINLANDEN