The master mage Maximilian Wolf is brought to Equestria through a spell, Celestia and Luna have used. There he has to fight an evil, to proctect Equestria and to be able to return home.
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Tripl3M
Proud believer in Germany and german beer
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Hmm, this is interesting, and I like it. But I suggest you try to change the 'structure' of the quotation marks, 'cause in my opinion, the German 'system' when it comes to quotation marks doesn't work too well with English, but it might just be me...
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Huh, I though I change all the quation marks from low to high.... You do mean these „ , right?
Maybe I should stop doing late nighters for university tasks and stories.
1860656 Yeah, I meant those. And I think you should follow you own advice. *chuckle*
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Did you know that Fimfiction had a save button?
I just realised, that as I was checking the story for same story plot stuff and I realised, that all my changes were undonde.
Why don't they say that?
1860993 Heh, I knew that and now you know it for the future.
^^ And well, I think they think it's easy to spot or something like that...
This is ironic, your fantasy-styled character is an overpowered Mage, and mine is an overpowered arcane-archer. And mine also can summon a dragon, just like yours.
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or Fluttershy's stare combined with Pinkie's fourth wall breaking 
or…… I ran out of example.
It's going to get worse. The word "overpowered" will have a new meaning after this story.
This guy is fucking overkill like Sauron, if Isildor wouldn't exist
The chapter, I am working on, will go a little in his past with a other character I will "introduced" kind of.
Play the "Guess-the-crossover-game" game, if you get it right, you get a free hug and kind of a idea, how powerful he'll get.
What arcane-archer? You only have that slaughter stroy from your friend?
He's on my pastebin, I never bothered to copy over my stories onto FiMFiction.
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Come on. It can be that bad. Even I posted my crap.
Give it a try.
There are so many spelling and grammar mistakes..
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That should be up right.
I did write the last three chapter around 2-3am, so sue me.
But asides that, how did you like the story so far?
Its pretty good but you need to improve your spelling and grammar. I had trouble figuring out what you were trying to say in some spots.
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I'll working on it. My English is a bit rusty still. Hope it will get better soon.
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Ugh, thinking……
Question: Could you make your character female?
Since you're not using him and I am looking for a strong female chraracter, who should be the former student of Maximilian and now is the leader of the Guild. She should be nearly as powerful in combat as Maximilian himself. And I am more or less running out of ideas for personality and I need it for either the next or the one after that.
So, it would be nice, if I could
copy, uhh gather ideas from your character?Who is that being, that can move son and moon?
Gute Arbeit, Triple. Und gute Nacht in Amerika.
2214789 Danke