King Sombra wants his old empire back, but he's become weak and needs to feed. He looks for help, and what he does is unexpected. He finds Princess Luna and re-corrupts her to return to Nightmare Moon, brakes Discord from his stone prison, gives Trixie back the alicorn amulet, and finds Queen Chrysalis and her changelings. They go to take back The Crystal Empire as a team. This is so the six friends can't stop all of them together. After they take back Sombra's Empire they decide to take all of Equestria, and what happens will make all of Equestria's history change.
Big Thanks to nygiants93 and OctavianRex
Chapters (4)
Question
Is this a joke fic?
If not then its Sombra not Sambra
1850456 I know that...i fixed it. It's my first fan fic, and I'm just trying something out. So don't be so serious!
Sounds interesting.
1850511
Im not being serious I was just asking
BTW the title and the description still say Sambra
1850548 do you know how to fix that?
1850520 thank you, but do you have any advice?
1850555
Near the top of the main story page (the place where you look at all the chapters) it says edit.
Click it then proceed to change the title and description. Click save at the very bottom.
If you would like advice for your fiction feel free to PM me.
I'm a semi popular author so I can share a few tips
Happy Holidays
1850566 thanks you to could you please help me
1850579
I didnt understand that last sentence
1850566 i'm sorry but what is PM
1850587
Private message
go to my user page (click my username)
Then click the small envelope beside my name that should bring up the PM interface
1850597 oh ok i can do that
1850585 of my story?
1850606
I didnt understand
1850612 thanks, happy holidays to you too, could you help me with my story
1850671
send me a PM with what you need help with
I wont be your editor or prereader for long due to my other responsibilities
1850558
#1 Discord isn't evil. He's sadistic and a prankster, but not evil.
#2 King Sombra is WAY less powerful than Discord, and I think all of the others save Trixie are stronger than KS.
#3 KS wouldn't wipe out his slaves. He wants to rule, not annihilate.
#4 Trixie wouldn't want the Alicorn Amulet.
#5 Changelings aren't evil. They need to eat.
#6 QC would kick KS's flank for killing a changeling.
All in all, you wrote them too evilly.
1853231 they were supposed to be strangely evil...whatever, it's a fan fic
1853548 Don't want to hurt your feelings, but I recommend adding Dark and Alternate Universe tags.
1854005 why would you offend me?
1854619 I wasn't trying to. I'm very sorry.
1856508 you didnt
I. Like it a lot can wait till the next chapter
1901246 thanks. sorry I've been procrastinating a bit
Okie dokie lokie
1854005 why alternate universe
2015656 Due to contradiction of Keep Calm and Flutter On, and their evilness.
Uhhhh... is the story SUPPOSED to feel like it's on fast forward?
2028323 sorry...ill try to kix that...it's still me 1st fan fic so i havent gotten the hang of it yet
oi its been years, continue, cancel, or rewrite, PICK ONE