For years now a creature wanders the world of Albion, with questions in his head and sand in his boots. The questions are rather simple: Where do I come from and where will I go? But how do they say? Sometimes, the journey is the reward.
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5463489 Have you ever met your colleague Weed Jesus?
First off; Damn... Amy needs to win. She was offered the better deal...
Secondly; I just recalled that I'm supposed to be pissed at Celestia. Banishing someone for falling prey to the machinations of the damn spirit of chaos? Seriously? Now I'm all worked up again.
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Amy's not really a changeling?!
Jokes aside, great chapter. I love OP Amy.
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OK, I really want to know how that got mixed up. And then I demand the same drugs...
Joke aside, Amy is a little, little bit OP. I mean, just think for a moment just what she is. A Alicorn Changeling hybrid that is powered by love and other emotions. And at the moment, her power is increased from the same as what makes a sex toy a sex toy. Location, location, location...
I know you like attacks that could make a planet explode. Give Amy around 100 years of magical training, a hate for planets and drop her in the Empire. I don't take responsibility for anything that happens afterwards.
5463904 She's, like, a riddle wrapped inside mystery inside an enigma, dude. Duuuude.
5464013 Oh, I know why she's OP, and I love it. Of course, power can only go so far when the one wielding it is as inexperience as she. Just look at Aura. As strong as she is, the only reason she won was because her opponent didn't take her seriously. If he decided to throw her out instead of drop her, it would have ended right there for her. I actually used that concept in a scene of my own, where a time traveling Twilight teaches an upity, teenage Celestia a bit of humility despite not being anywhere near as powerful as the alicorn.
Also, I only like those huge, earth shattering attacks when it fits the story. A story like this, it really wouldn't fit, so the guided missiles are awesome enough
5464042 And marinaded in a quandary.
So Eris offered Amy to send BOTH to earth, but offered Thiemo to send HIM. AND they can't talk about it AND they don't know about the other's bet. The fun is about to begin!
well, this complicates things.
If Thiemo wins he will get sent to earth alone, and if Amy wins they both will. However both scenarios leaves Cadence and Shining in charge of the Crystal Empire. But if Amy wins Shining loses his daughter.
5466350 Not to mention poor little Aura gets left behind either way...
Found two typos: one in the first sentence where story is supposed to be store
And this one should be built.
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Thanks for pointing them out.
Wow, finally caught up on something I lost a couple times.
Fight scenes are great, see the different style, possibilites of combat, without needing to see how many different subdivisions each opponant can undergo.
When Eris said to send him home, how many different options did she have? Auras home, Sweet Apple Acres, Amaryliis home, Crystal Empire, as in no change and a waste of a wish, Lyras home, Canterlot, human home, Ti, Humans old home, Broken Leylands and the hive that wants to eat him, before you even get to the deep time jump, and back to where he started from on Earth, except right in front of a screaming burning out of control 18 wheeler or train?
On the battlefield, Gravity is the ultimate ruler. After all, if you need to hit somone harder, you can use a bigger rock, or drop it further ot through a stronger gravity field. Eventually it will collapse into a black hole, especially if you are thinking with portals and vaccuum.
Im waiting for the rest of the fights, as I havent a clue whats going to happen, I just like to design weird, strange, and alien advanced techmagic.
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I don't think so. This is only the second story I ever wrote.
But thanks for the praise.
5490005 Thanks for pointing that out.
Does NO ONE understand the concept 'deal with the devil'?
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Why did he even accept that bet in the first place? I thought he had pretty much decided to stay there.
soooooooo, what does eris get if she wins the bet?
Well, for one Any is not as bound by it as Theimo is, and Amy can tell people about the deal, but the major difference is that Eros offered Theimo a ticket home, not to earth, but home while he offered Amy a trip to earth with theimo.
And no one asked Eros what she would get out of the deal.