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DerpyMuffins15


I love Luna stories, but not ones that are too sad to read.

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Depressed after only having one pony show up for her Winter Concert, Octavia slumps herself within the holiday season. Not to mention the pony that did show up was her marefriend, Vinyl didn't exactly count as a viewer. Nothing to be merry about, Octavia is likely to spend another Hearth's Warming Eve alone, again. The only problem — Octavia wants to spend it alone. Her stubborn marefriend, Vinyl has other plans in mind as a blizzard hits Canterlot quickly and unexpectedly, sealing both ponies inside her apartment until the weather clears. Hilarity or insanity she doesn't know, but Octavia seems to enjoy spending time with the upstart DJ.

A/N: My first holiday special. Hope you guys take kindly to trying writers! Any criticism is appreciated as long as it's helpful!

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Comments ( 20 )

Why is there only one coment on this (other than the creators) if there are a junk load of people reading this it should have more comment's :twilightsmile:

She dranka case of champagne and wasn't tipsy yet can't hold alcohol? It ain't like Octavias gonna be pissed off. She won't remember that Vinyl drugged her! Bad Vinyl.

Good story. But I mean a roofie? Come on. Now to a friend maybe. And that'd be just to be an asshole. But to your girlfriend? Then telling her? Maybe a bit much.

PL

Good story and Happy Holidays! :twilightsmile:

quite confusing but great story!! happy holidays:pinkiehappy:

that turned out pretty well!:pinkiehappy:

1850415 Genius.Just genius! Happy Holidays to you too!

it was getting a bit steamy,wonder why she fought it:rainbowhuh:, well done.:twilightsmile:

Chapter 2 isn't showing up in my dashboard, it was pure chance that I found out that it had updated. I have seen a few other stories having the same problem.

She does the same thing for the next four years, with the same company too. Until she met you she continues this holiday tradition with her family.”

The wording of this confused me. Is it she does it for for years then meets Vinyl and stops? Or she does it for for years before her family came back?

If its the Vinyl, she is just a filly so how would meeting Vinyl change doing that (that probably didn't come out right cuz I couldn't find the right wording)?

If they came back and she still did it with them until she met Vinyl, why was she alone ten years later if the did the dinner until she met Vinyl (which I'm guessing was after last but befor this christmas)?

Sorry, your wording threw me for a loop.

Now, what you need to do is go have Twilight use the time travelling spell to go back in time to stop you from druggin Tavi.

IMPORTANT!! Have Twilight do it so Octavia doesn't lose it. And so you don't accidentally touch yourself causing space and time to collapse.

Good chapter can't wait for more.

“Hey Shakespeare, this is the 21st century. Not the dark ages.”
“Would thou rather We talk like a ‘pimp’?”
“Ye- Actually, on second thought, never mind. Let’s just get this over with.”

I probably laughed a little to hard at that line. Well done with that! :rainbowlaugh:

It was nice. No imagery though. I mean they're on a couch but is it still in the living room or somewhere else? It was nice though. Can't wait for more.

I think a nightmare/vinyl story would kick much flank, I also do not think I have ever seen than pairing either in a romantic setting I mean

Yes, doooo eeeeeetttt! The possibilities of Vinyl and Nightmare no mortal can truly comprehend.

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Yeah. Because if that happens again, I'll have to be the one to clean it all up. Again. But at least I won't be the one causing the paradox like so many other times.

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