*Alondro continues with what obviously comes next*
They reached Carrot Top's home and Spike went up to the front door to hold it for Carrot.
"Ah, no, Spike. We need to go around back for what I need from you," the lovely mare fluttered her eyes and drew Spike with them as she led him round the house. "Spike..." she murmured lustily as they reached the privacy of the rear. "Out here... out in the open air and natural spleandour of the world... I want you to plow my field!"
Spike nearly dropped dead from heart failure, until his sex-crazed teenage hormones started it back up and kicked it into overdrive. "You really want that?" is what he would have said had his brain not undergone a super critical chain reaction and melted down into his loins where it was making things uncomfortably tight. Instead, he spluttered and mumbled something like, "Baabaahummabahwah..."
"Yes Spike," Carrot crooned. "I need someone big and strong and hunky like you to plow it hard. My field hasn't had a heavy blade cut deeply into it for years. It's furrows feels so cold and stagnant. It hasn't had a savage turning over for too long. Not since Big Mac did it a couple years ago."
Spike gagged, "B-Big Mac?!!" Damn, Carrot really went for the big ones!
Carrot nodded, her eyes half-closed as she leaned forward, tilting her lips towards his snout, "You don't mind, do you? I just don't think he's got it in him anymore to plow a field like mine deep enough any more to make it worth my while..."
Spike had swam through lava several times in his life, but never had he felt heat like this! His loins began to swell. "N-not at all! Pleasure's all mine!" he weakly squawked.
Carrot pulled away and merrily trotted to a big old plow leaning against the back wall, "Great! Well, here's the plow and there's the field! Make sure to plow between the furrows on the second pass! I can't thank you enough for this! Since Big Mac started getting older, he just can't get the furrows deep enough, and you know how hard soil stunts carrot growth!" She cantered into the house and called back to him, "I'll get some fresh carrot juice made up for you if you get thirsty."
Spike blinked, his jaw feeling like it was about to plunge to the planet's core as his junk shrivelled up into a teensy prune.
Well now, it is refreshing to see a clopfic with an actua story to it. We need more stories like this! Plus, this is a pairing that you never see, so that adds to it in my book!
1820153 In all seriousness, the author probably meant foals, a lot of people make the mistake of thinking filly is the universal term for young equine.
18211171820153 I didn't forget that fact, but I appreciate the suggestion. Honestly, I just thought to myself that colts would probably find the sight of a dragon less intimidating than a filly would and might even find him cool. Obviously, the first thing wrong with that is me assuming things, so I can definitely change that to "foals," thanks
At first i thought we were going to see the previous chapter from Spike's perspective, so that threw me a little. Must be tired. Liking the buildup. I'm sure Carrot doesn't need to do that to draw more custom, but it seems a sound business practice so far. Well done, I look forward to more
I can't explain why, but I found it really hard to imagine Carrot Top's dress. It was really cute how you made her all shy and clumsy, yet strong. Hope to read the new chapter soon, and take care. Happy new year by the way.
I honestly feel that your stories have some romantic meaning to them while throwing in the final tense- clop ofcourse. I just love the way you build up things before the breaking moment. Your style is amazing as well. You have a sworn follower by your side sir.
“You really wanna know, big boy? Why don’t you turn around and see for yourself~”
“Wait. No no, that’s way too strong,” Carrot Top hesitated as her mind replayed the possible outcomes in her head. She tried to think of what to say, but every time she drew a blank. “Oh, I’m blowing it already!”
oh yes here it comes its good to see a clop with a bit of story.
Hating being a fast reader again
Huh, does that fall under teasing, date, other, or sex? Not sex since we don't quite know yet...
FIRST!!!
YES UPDATE!! I like this story keep it up!
*Alondro continues with what obviously comes next*
They reached Carrot Top's home and Spike went up to the front door to hold it for Carrot.
"Ah, no, Spike. We need to go around back for what I need from you," the lovely mare fluttered her eyes and drew Spike with them as she led him round the house. "Spike..." she murmured lustily as they reached the privacy of the rear. "Out here... out in the open air and natural spleandour of the world... I want you to plow my field!"
Spike nearly dropped dead from heart failure, until his sex-crazed teenage hormones started it back up and kicked it into overdrive. "You really want that?" is what he would have said had his brain not undergone a super critical chain reaction and melted down into his loins where it was making things uncomfortably tight. Instead, he spluttered and mumbled something like, "Baabaahummabahwah..."
"Yes Spike," Carrot crooned. "I need someone big and strong and hunky like you to plow it hard. My field hasn't had a heavy blade cut deeply into it for years. It's furrows feels so cold and stagnant. It hasn't had a savage turning over for too long. Not since Big Mac did it a couple years ago."
Spike gagged, "B-Big Mac?!!" Damn, Carrot really went for the big ones!
Carrot nodded, her eyes half-closed as she leaned forward, tilting her lips towards his snout, "You don't mind, do you? I just don't think he's got it in him anymore to plow a field like mine deep enough any more to make it worth my while..."
Spike had swam through lava several times in his life, but never had he felt heat like this! His loins began to swell. "N-not at all! Pleasure's all mine!" he weakly squawked.
Carrot pulled away and merrily trotted to a big old plow leaning against the back wall, "Great! Well, here's the plow and there's the field! Make sure to plow between the furrows on the second pass! I can't thank you enough for this! Since Big Mac started getting older, he just can't get the furrows deep enough, and you know how hard soil stunts carrot growth!" She cantered into the house and called back to him, "I'll get some fresh carrot juice made up for you if you get thirsty."
Spike blinked, his jaw feeling like it was about to plunge to the planet's core as his junk shrivelled up into a teensy prune.
>Stallion gets bonked in the face by a carrot.
>Immediately see this in my mind:
dudelol.com/img/man-getting-hit-in-the-face-in-slow-motion-with-a-dildo.gif
>My sides. My fucking sides.
OH GOD, I NEED MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR
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Well now, it is refreshing to see a clopfic with an actua story to it. We need more stories like this!
Plus, this is a pairing that you never see, so that adds to it in my book!
I WANT MOAR!
Continue...
Now we're getting somewhere.
1818457 i'd be satisfied if that's how it would really end.
1819091
While I like writing fics ending in a decent joke, I also still like writing clop and not just yanking people's chains.
So, we'll compromise
1819650 *dances across the screen* Trolololo!
Why not also include COLTS?!!
1820153 In all seriousness, the author probably meant foals, a lot of people make the mistake of thinking filly is the universal term for young equine.
Does this make Carrot Top a cougar? I mean, she's obviously a mature mare and Spike is a teenager of a dragon.
...and why for the love of Celestia's sweet flank can I not get that stupid 70's porn music out of my head now?!
1821117 1820153
I didn't forget that fact, but I appreciate the suggestion. Honestly, I just thought to myself that colts would probably find the sight of a dragon less intimidating than a filly would and might even find him cool. Obviously, the first thing wrong with that is me assuming things, so I can definitely change that to "foals," thanks
1821820 I really don't see it that way myself, but I don't disregard your thinking all the same.
1821117 I get that now, didn't think of it as a mistake at the time.
1821820 You know what they say about assuming it makes an ass out of u and me
*thup up, fave, fellow* I want to read more~~~ *stares at you*
1818295 I feel you.
At first i thought we were going to see the previous chapter from Spike's perspective, so that threw me a little. Must be tired. Liking the buildup. I'm sure Carrot doesn't need to do that to draw more custom, but it seems a sound business practice so far. Well done, I look forward to more
1848123 Well, thank you! And it's not even done yet
Saddle up Spike.
I can't explain why, but I found it really hard to imagine Carrot Top's dress. It was really cute how you made her all shy and clumsy, yet strong. Hope to read the new chapter soon, and take care.
Happy new year by the way.
This is amazing, I can't wait for the final chapter.
1818457
LMFAO ROFL
That would be the best.
>Spike knew It was more than a friendship
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And then they
That's right Spike follow that plot!
You dog, I mean err... dragon?
1818559
Best. GIf. EVER!!
Oooh
I honestly feel that your stories have some romantic meaning to them while throwing in the final tense- clop ofcourse. I just love the way you build up things before the breaking moment. Your style is amazing as well. You have a sworn follower by your side sir.
He must be hopeless if he can't tell she's hitting on him.
Lol! This is like telltale games in a nutshell!