Well, it certainly has been a while, hasn't it? That little fact won't change that I still enjoy this story. I'm a real sucker for these mushy-gushy romance stories (Well, this chapter, at least) and I gotta say, this was a pretty good chapter. Now, about the thing to come with Vinyl... Can you try to give her as much dignity as you can? Please? What, with my profile picture and whatnot. It would suck to see her as weak and cling-y like she has been.
2432047 well that's awesome that you continue to enjoy my story man! I actually never really planned to make Vinyl clingy, I looked at is as more of a dis-illusioned hope that they could be together.
2318042 It first I was like . Then I was like . Now I'm like .
Sorry, I'm in a goofy mood right now. The response to this comment is long overdue and for that I apologize. I had quit the site and almost the fandom altogether over these past few months. I go into further detail in my latest chapter of my story but whatever. Anyways... I thank you for pointing these issues out. Yes I know my grammar is not A+ quality, not even C- for that matter. I do try my best to catch my mistakes but when I write my Fics its usually really, really late at night so obviously I'm not firing on all of my cylinders. I am glad to have had one of the premiere writers of this site view my story and critique it to a certain degree, and I most definitely don't want to be an addition to the heap pile of good fics out there that just lacked simple editing.
With that being said, I was wondering if you could do me a favor. No I'm not going to ask you to edit for me, I am fairly certain your far to busy to do that. No, what I want from you is another shot to show you my work. I'm going to be reediting my entire fic while I type up the next chapter of it. Once the tweaks are made would you be willing to read it again? Hopefully it would be to your liking.
2451088 It's always fun to see another person who, at least occasionally, wakes up at noon on a weekday. The entirety of my family are health nuts so they're always perstering me to wake up early at 6-8 AM to go to the gym with them.
Now, what would an angry drunk Vinyl do? ...Octavia, good luck, especially being that I wouldn't be surprised if Vinyl asks Pinkie to break the fourth wall (again) and recruit DEMONS!!!
not bad mate, this is one of the few stories on this site with a storyline that is atcually logical in a since. If you ever need an editor let me know and I'll do what i can to help you develop your story.
i really like this story and id like to make it one of my favs ... but its hard to come to that decision seen as you don't update regularly.. but please tell me that you are going to update more so i can change my mind
2632376 Originally it was going to be updated on the 23rd but I have family coming from Florida to visit me, so I have been on a constant cleaning spree to make sure everything is spic and span for them. So once that's taken care of I'll have an update for everyone.
2430753 Fixed
Commence read.
Looks like the more honest and blunt approach helped.
Now for Vinyl to be dealt with.
Interesting...
2431157 I hope that's a good thing xD
Well, it certainly has been a while, hasn't it?
That little fact won't change that I still enjoy this story.
I'm a real sucker for these mushy-gushy romance stories (Well, this chapter, at least) and I gotta say, this was a pretty good chapter. Now, about the thing to come with Vinyl...
Can you try to give her as much dignity as you can? Please?
What, with my profile picture and whatnot. It would suck to see her as weak and cling-y like she has been.
2432047 well that's awesome that you continue to enjoy my story man! I actually never really planned to make Vinyl clingy, I looked at is as more of a dis-illusioned hope that they could be together.
So original it BURNS
Derp
Kidding. I seriously like how you're writing this out.
Very nice to see this story continue.
LyraOctavia forever!
2431561
S' a good thing indeed!
2318042 It first I was like . Then I was like . Now I'm like .
Sorry, I'm in a goofy mood right now. The response to this comment is long overdue and for that I apologize. I had quit the site and almost the fandom altogether over these past few months. I go into further detail in my latest chapter of my story but whatever. Anyways... I thank you for pointing these issues out. Yes I know my grammar is not A+ quality, not even C- for that matter. I do try my best to catch my mistakes but when I write my Fics its usually really, really late at night so obviously I'm not firing on all of my cylinders. I am glad to have had one of the premiere writers of this site view my story and critique it to a certain degree, and I most definitely don't want to be an addition to the heap pile of good fics out there that just lacked simple editing.
With that being said, I was wondering if you could do me a favor. No I'm not going to ask you to edit for me, I am fairly certain your far to busy to do that. No, what I want from you is another shot to show you my work. I'm going to be reediting my entire fic while I type up the next chapter of it. Once the tweaks are made would you be willing to read it again? Hopefully it would be to your liking.
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2450478 okay I literally just woke up and already, my day has been made.
2451088 It's always fun to see another person who, at least occasionally, wakes up at noon on a weekday. The entirety of my family are health nuts so they're always perstering me to wake up early at 6-8 AM to go to the gym with them.
2451562 I was up at like 9 because I live on the west coat 0.o
2452022 Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it anyways.
applause a great story so far...
Now, what would an angry drunk Vinyl do? ...Octavia, good luck, especially being that I wouldn't be surprised if Vinyl asks Pinkie to break the fourth wall (again) and recruit DEMONS!!!
2479549 your comment frightens me.
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Good, everything went according to plan. ...Uh, I think I should leave before Pinkie unleashes any demons...so, bye!
2434531 Super late response, apparently my original comment to you did not go through... So here's my response
Glad to see you are enjoying the story.
not bad mate, this is one of the few stories on this site with a storyline that is atcually logical in a since. If you ever need an editor let me know and I'll do what i can to help you develop your story.
2521524 did'ya now?
That's good to hear.. I think
i really like this story and id like to make it one of my favs ... but its hard to come to that decision seen as you don't update regularly.. but please tell me that you are going to update more so i can change my mind
2632376 Originally it was going to be updated on the 23rd but I have family coming from Florida to visit me, so I have been on a constant cleaning spree to make sure everything is spic and span for them. So once that's taken care of I'll have an update for everyone.
The drunk excuse will always work!!!