Twilight Sparkle was presumed to be dead. Destroyed without even a body to bury, the young victim of a deadly magical surge that claimed the lives of many others along side her. More than a decade later, reports of a violent murder by a pony bearing her name are brought to Celestia and Luna's attention. A trail of carnage leading directly towards Canterlot's doorstep, brought by a pony who strikes without mercy. As Twilight approaches, in service to an unknown master, the Alicorn Sisters desperately try to uncover what happened all those years ago.
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Well this could be interesting, have a tracking, but you better come up with a decent reason why she survived in no-ponies land as a kid and came out as a super soldier when the time comes.
how'd it sound with the song of " im coming home?"
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As the chapters progress I will reveal more and more bout her past both what happened to make her leave, and how she survived
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See above comment
There's a handful of grammar errors, but not a bad start otherwise. Tentatively tracking until more chapters come and I can form a better opinion.
I saw the tabs wont the other elements appear or you just listed the more important ones?
liked the beginning Moar
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Nope just Twilight and Rainbow
Celestia will also be a major character, but I could only select 5 main characters and I think Luna will be more important
I like this story!
I am, though, slightly irked by the small grammar errors here and there. Do you want an editor? If not, that's fine. 
But I'll be willing if you need one! 
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I wish someone would tell me what the bucking errors are so I can fix them.
I currently don't have an editor and would be greatfull if you would be mine
i keep an eye on you. this seems promising. in the mean time, might i recommend my favorite fanfic? its called "The Immortal Game" I think you would enjoy it.
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I am always running out of things to read. I'll give it a try
All of my yes.
All of it.
All of my yes.
All of it.
A most intriguing premise.... A hardened loner Twilight who isn't afraid to use all of the enormous power she was born with to it's fullest (and lethal) potential?
The power of the Element of Magic, without the pacifistic nature gained from her normal upbringing?
Consider me highly curious, and eager for more.
Excellent work.
Though I wonder who the love interest(s) will be? 
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It will get even better. Trust me
Buck... and dashie of course
no one else could handle a fellow light spectrum 
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HUH??????
1894832 ok when dealing with me take what i say oon the same level of trying to explain pinkie
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Try your best to explain though
1894855 i think the love interest could be dashie , as in the spectrum thing, a rainbow is the visible light separated into its primary colors, twilight is the time of day between day and night, basically another wave length occurring only for a limited time.
1894778 I have every intention of doing so.
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I wont give spoilers, but that's a pretty good guess. You put a lot of research into your analyses. Job well done
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I hope to not leave you dissapointed
9Time for me to step out of my comfort zone and try a more violent fanfiction, doing that a lot lately (that is step out of my comfort zone, maybe I made an unconscious New Years resolution) . I like this story and it is fairly alluring to make me want more of it with the amount of patience Pinkie Pie has with anything except her best friends
. Favorite and thumbs up, keep up the good work.
My name? Twilight Sparkle
Wait. If Twilight disappeared as a filly, and only now returned, then how's Luna there?
this is to good to only have one chapter, I NEED MORE!
oh please let there be more, how do we have more? there must be more.
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Alternate universe
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There will be more, in fact I have a few more in my hopper, but I learned the hard way from my other story that I can't pout three in a row out, other wise I won't have anything in case I get writers block. Don't worry you will have more soon
1895008 Thankyou kindly.
I'm just praying it's not a Twimac.
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The Lone Shadow. I understand you are nervous about the romance part of the story specifically that it will be Twimac. I will keep my response short and simple
(Ahem)... BUCK NO
Hope this clears everything up for you
Whooo damn... Twilights a phycopathic badass... I like this... Do continue...
well, color me captivated
cant wait for the next chapter
Holy buck. I must have really out done myself. In less than 18 hours have almost as many favorites than my other story has collected in 2 months
I'm gunna through out a wild guess saying you're favorite pony is Twilight.
Anywho, I like where your going with the story.
I'll be waiting for more!
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Actually it's Luna, but Twilight is definetly my second. i just really like the idea of a renegade and unstable Twilight
1897406 Thank god for that.
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Alternate universe. No Nightmare Moon and the Elements of Harmony or dormant again.
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No. Only two of them
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A few more questions will be answered with the next chapter
In 19 hours I have more favorites on this story than my first in one and a half months. Thank you so much everypony, and Congratulations to Mermz for being the 88th favoriter
too
Also, your sentences often seem very.. fragmented? I'm not a grammartitrician, but things like
sound better to me with commas. The sentences are broken up too often by periods, which causes them to read haltingly.
Should be "past." Again, I think this needs a comma.
What's, your
should be
I like the premise of your story. I think you could tell it a lot better if you took some time to read up on and practice grammar and style.
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I just got an editor, and haven't been able to fix the grammar mistakes yet. Trust your not the only one telling me, but it's appriciated