Blade woke up in a hospital bed and looked around and saw different ponies in other beds beside him then he heard "what is it luna" a voice said on the other side of the door
"I don't know twilight sparkle it is something we have never seen before" another voice said in a voice of a ruler
"Well shoot... ah know that thing in there ain't no pony so if you two don't know what it is then who does" a third female farmer voice said.
"Well um we could just ask it when it wakes up i mean if you want to" a fourth shy voice said
"Or we could just leave it alone if that thing is dangerous then I don't want you guys getting hurt" a fifth ruler like voice said
"Yeah I don't want my friends getting hurt cause of some metal creature" a sixth sportsman female voice said
"I don't know it did ask for help when twilight found it down stairs instead of attacking her" a seventh elegant voice said
"Yeah if it wanted to kill us it would have done it by now" another cheerful voice said while it giggled
"Well it could have asked for help then kill us while we trust it" the sportsman voice said
"Come on dashie I don't think it wants to hurt us"
The sportsman voice sighed in defeat then said "fine let’s go in and ask it why it's here"
"no me and luna will go in it still might be hostile I can't afford to lose the thing that might be the only thing that can defeat it-" blade tuned the rulers voice out
blade got up mumbling something about the rulers mother then checked to see if everything was working properly then headed to the door not making a sound then said "I'm not hostile" blade heard some gasps coming from the other side of the door just after hearing "guards" in a loud voice ruler voice so blade backed up and heard thudding coming on the other side of the door then blade's eye's were grey meaning he was confused 'I just said I was not hostile what is up with this' the door broke down showing a bunch of ponies with some armor and spears in their mouths so blade's eye's went green "what is this pathetic excuse for a combat unit"
"Get to the ground now" one of the armored ponies said in a commanding voice
blade's eye's turned yellow meaning he was happy while he laughed when he stopped laughing his eyes turned green again then he said "i'm thinking... no" the armored ponies looked mad and charged for blade but their attempt failed because they got flung halfway across the building while they were clear blade saw eight other ponies one cyan blue with rainbow colored hair, a white one with purple colored hair, a terrified yellow one with pink hair, a totally pink one even her hair was pink with tangles and knots that just smiled at you, a tall white one with sparkling hair with a crown and chest piece on, a black one with dark blue sparkling hair, a purple one with dark purple hair with a pink highlight, and a orange one with blonde hair "what in the name of machine kind is this crap" they gasped at the remark
“Listen here metal daemon we are princess luna ruler of equestria and that is not a way to talk to royalty" the dark pony said
"Oh yeah well I'm the king of England" blade said sarcastically
The purple pony furrowed her eye 0brows "don't talk to luna that way"
“I take it you're the brave one moron of the group" blade deadpanned only getting more gasps
the tall white pony looked really mad "listen here you may be able to talk to royalty back where you came from but that is not how we do it here so behave"
"Okay mom whatever you say oh and by the way buck you" blade said walking away
"Hey you can't jus' insult us and expect to get away with it" the orange pony said angrily
"oh yeah well I just did so sit down and shut up I got to get back home and beat the crap out of my leader, stuff him in a box, and give him to his mom for hearths warming eve" he got more gasps until the cyan pony tackled blade
This is incredible! I've never seen anything like it!
1788747 thanks dude i worked hard on this
1788747 wait are you being sarcastic
Why have all the comments been deleted?
1788759 My life will never be the same after reading this.
1788762 cause this used to be a different story
1788762 i mean this used to my story called the war for equestria but that had to many dislikes
1788780
Why not just create a whole new story? All the dislikes on the old story will now be on the new story...
EDIT: Also, you may want to get yourself a proofreader; I skimmed the first paragraph and the grammar isn't too good.
1788761 If you expect a lack sarcasm of FIMfiction, you're gonna have a bad time.
1788789 i know but i was to lazy to start a new story... besides i'm not taking it down now
1788794 what do you mean
1788796
But it makes the story look bad!
notice to the ones who are watching me if you like this story i need some likes on this so people won't think this is terrible
1788798 If you can't use proper punctuation when talking to me, you're gonna have a bad time.
1788809 okay what is a proof reader
1788815
A proofreader is someone who goes through the story mostly just correcting small things like grammatical errors and the such.
1788815 A proof-reader is someone who reads over your stuff and edits it so it is presentable.
1788805
You seriously should have created a new story for this very reason.
1788836 alright how can i get you as a proof reader
1788868
Just ask nicely.
1788868 Ask politely and hope they've got nothing better to do. Which they probably have.
1788874 can you be my proof reader
1788881 if you hate the story so much you shoud just leave instead of insulting me
1788883
Say please!
Sure, send me your e-mail in a PM and I'll send it to you whenever I get around to doing it, which will be in the next couple of days.
1788883 Nope.
1788908 and you are a bronie?
1788913 Pegasister, actually.
1788920 okay