Fiasco doesn't seem to describe a bunch of semi-submerged sharks very well, considering most of them didn't even get to do anything. And since when does fairly frustrated apply to any kind of fish?
2736745 Plus, the scene would then at least partially follow them away, when the author wants us to be stuck behind with the sharks, at least for a measured moment. The point is that they disappeared, not that they fled.
Sorry, just a bit late in hitting submit, it is totally not my intent to spam you with nitpicks.
2737120 That's kind of what I was expecting. This is very different but in a good way... Okay, an odd way. I think without pinkie's shenanigans, it wouldn't be nearly as... readable. Also
“Applejack, please,” Twilight said. “This is no time to be like that, so just pull yourself together.”
That's a terrible joke, but I can't stop laughing.
Ahhh. I must know.
Did you have fun with this one?
~Skeeter The Lurker
I predict that it'll be the classic movie reveal of her lower half suddenly missing.
I'm a genius!
Okay, so what does one usually say after reading another awesome chapter?... Mm... Moar? Yes, that's it. MOAR!
MOAR
Then the shark pops up in the middle of Joe's Daycare and Adult Video Emporium.
Well.
That happened.
LOL.
MOAR!
WEEEEEOOOO!
It is a most illusive fish...
oh-oh God! my sides! *splits in half*
*pop* huh.....I didn't know you could die of laughter....
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Fiasco doesn't seem to describe a bunch of semi-submerged sharks very well, considering most of them didn't even get to do anything. And since when does fairly frustrated apply to any kind of fish?
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Plus, the scene would then at least partially follow them away, when the author wants us to be stuck behind with the sharks, at least for a measured moment. The point is that they disappeared, not that they fled.
Sorry, just a bit late in hitting submit, it is totally not my intent to spam you with nitpicks.
I know one way to die!
KaaaaaBOOM
Is this story like that family guy episode where Peter Griffon kills him self a shit load of times because he cant die?
A body that can't permanently die? I smell the stench of Dark/Demon Souls here...
Dash and Applejack are going to be so upset when they find out Celestia could have solved this in a heartbeat.
I smell Hard Reset by Eakins here...
2736698 No! Not the kids! AND GOD NO! THE PORN!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
More shenanigans and RD deaths.
2736899 Doesn't help when your body reincarnates no matter how pulverized it gets...
Bloody brilliant!
I have to ask why is this noot marked comedy? Because this story has had me laughing so damn hard.
This has got to be the most macabre thing I've ever read.
Why am I enjoying it?
I like this.
I like this a lot.
As usual, disgusting and hilarious.
More! Also please add a comedy tag, this is too funny!
I normally don't like gore. At all. But the consequence-free nature of this story turns it into a textbook example of the term "Bloody Hilarious".
Needs a comedy tag.
Needs a team-up with Discord.
Needs more love.
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That's kind of what I was expecting.
This is very different but in a good way... Okay, an odd way. I think without pinkie's shenanigans, it wouldn't be nearly as... readable. Also
That's a terrible joke, but I can't stop laughing.
I really hope Fluttershy and Rarity can get in on this as well. It wouldn't do to leave them out of the curse fun!
I can't help but wonder what goes through your imagination to allow you to come up with so many ways for Rainbow Dash to die.
I love this story
hahaha lol
thanks for keeping my life entertaining!
Elixir
Monty Python reference FTW
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2771828 ....you killed it with science
I love this story there is so much GORE
You must be having so much fun writing this.
2736821 And it went, wherever I did go.
This story just got *puts on sunglasses* fishy.
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Glad I'm not the only one who thought of that
2778631 i kill things.... for fun.
Oh, that tickles. Hahaha, oh stop! No really, stop. You can stop now. There we go, now, lets get goin.... oh dear, eh..... You alright Rainbow Dash?
Note to self: Wiggling around in someone is deadly. I'll go get the body bags. :P
Ahahaha. Pure gold!