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Hydra
Hello to my fellow Bronies and Pegasisters. My favorite mane pony is Applejack, favorite background pony is Derpy (how dare they change her name), and we are conflicted on which princess is our fav.
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A gift for Cloppie? I can't wait to give this a read when I'm not in a public area. For once I'm glad I scanned the new stories list.
~SolidFire
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And I'm glad you decided to notice it. I'm hoping she reads, and enjoys, the gift.
Hydra
Good job buddy, although I'd really like a full version of the Tridox story. How their relationship progresses and Cosmic keeping his eye over her. Maybe throw a twist or turn in here and there.
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Well, I did give the excerpt a title if you'd noticed. Maybe it has a connection to a future story ...or chapter...
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I mean, it's a really interesting story, isn't it? To me it is. That and the fact NOBODY looks at the new stories list anymore...
3383030 You'll just have to wait and see.
Also, I might use Cosmic as a unicorn for that story/chapter instead of an alicorn.
3383072 You would have to. "How is her step-brother an Alicorn?" Even with an Alt Universe tag, you'd have to go in-depth on how she got an Alicorn in the family.
Oh, the Elements Theme? That's sick. Dubstep + Violin = Awesome.
Just a notice, but I was wondering if any of you readers would like to post absurd comments for this fic, either making fun of the Oc's or turning a part of the plot (hehe) into an embarrassing situation.
For every comment done in that way will receive a mustache, like, follow or a favorite for one of their stories; no matter how viscous, degrading and comedic the comments are.
I also won't report them, as long as you don't start ripping on other commenters.
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Play the theme for Echidna and elements at the same time. They are meant to clash, but at 00:50 they suddenly have a tentative unity. I planned it pretty well I think.
3383113 Sweet.
Challenge Accepted
Oh my god, what the fuck? An ALICORN? Can you BE more original? Jesus fucking Christ, anybody with a BRAINSTEM could come up with a better OC! And he's a fucking "abusive step-brother"? You are fucking horrible! My one year old sister could write a better story than this! Oh, and Paradox denying Trixie? Come the fuck on! He would have taken her right there and not given a damn about her getting pregnant!
Challenge Complete
What if Cosmic stumbled upon them whilst they where busy? I think that would be an incredibly awkward encounter I'd enjoy xD
Great story kudos too you. I'll like and favourite it :D
3383237 You have earned the first mustache. *Achievement unlocked*
Is this like a fucking hump-fest, or something? Why are they all just piling up on Rainbow? What, is she like a certified whore when she joins the Wonderbolts, or something?
Even I'm not that forward!
Challenge Complete(?)
That'd be one nice hump-fest, though...
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Challenge complete!
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Now we wait for the others...
Frankly, this would be better as romance without the clop (but then, I don't like clop so much). I like Paradox, and I like the story in story format.
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Thought so to, which is why this didn't become a straight clop. If I hadn't been writing such a small story, and it wasnt kinda meant for TwilightClopple, it would've been more romance oriented.
About Paradox, he'll be the protagonist in a future story, and I have some coverart you can preview.
Finally, 'story in story format?" I'm interested in what you mean.
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There's the story, then there's you and Eclipse discussing the story as you write it.
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Ahah. You enjoyed the story-ception. It was a fun aspect to work with, and I'm hoping to use it again in the future.
On a seperate note, how did you feel about the coverart? I was trying to find something more relateable, but decided to use something I had commisioned from my friend in London, U.K..
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I'd like to thank the academy for giving me this opportunity. I'd like to thank my family for always being there through the tough times.
:P
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* loud clapping ensues*
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Lol all jokes aside, thoroughly enjoyed your story :D
Now that I'm not in public and comfortably seated with lotion and kleenex, I can give this a read. Interesting beginning with a very nice turn of events by switching perspective and... well, characters. That was cool. Now onto the REAL stuff.
~SolidFire
Well then... That was... I don't even know. My hopes were so high from the first chapter. I still gave this a thumbs up because it was well written, but I only actually finished it because I started it. I'm not a fan of Trixie at all, so having that much focus on her lost it for me. Now, taking in your reason mentioned for not keeping going with that Dash and Lightning clop, I really hope you decide to actually keep going with that, because that's the entire reason I read this. I'd love some RainbowDust clop. Please think of doing it, because that will be amazing.
~SolidFire
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Only for you Solidfire. (XP) I'll be sure to send you the story via PM.
Also, feel free to leave a cruel comment. It's a challenge I posted earlier in the comments.
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You rock man. I'll try to think of something to rip this story to pieces with.
~SolidFire