End of an Era: Ponykind's Folly

The fall of pony civilization. With tensions high and everything falling apart, everypony knew it was inevitable. Or was it? One pony, one of the remnants of civilization, looks back on the decisions make and how they could have gone differently. He asks the questions that plague his mind; how could this have been prevented? Why did this happen? Most importantly, where do we go from here; how do we move on?

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Axel Nyan

Axel Nyan #1 · Dec 3rd, 2012 · · ·

... Wow. There is nothing I can say that will truly depict how I feel. Just... Wow. (This is a good thing)

KillerSteel

KillerSteel #2 · Dec 3rd, 2012 · · ·

I liked the story. There was a lot of grammatical mistakes, as well as some spelling errors, but the overall message hit home. I enjoyed it.

Should've had a few more flash backs to the war itself, but it was an enjoyable romp through post-apoc Canterlot. I got kind of confused with the scenes though; for a moment, I thought Spark was in Ponyville and not Canterlot. It's not very clear on where he is.

azednew

azednew #3 · Dec 3rd, 2012 · · ·

I like it! Elec, you're better than you give yourself credit for. But, Steel is right. There were a few errors, but they didn't really detract from the initial reading.

Regidar

Regidar #4 · Dec 3rd, 2012 · · ·

1727996>>1728041>>1729508
Fuck you you fucking cheaters

Nibrudly

Nibrudly #5 · Dec 3rd, 2012 · · ·

Whatta moral...good show, sir.

However, it pains me that no one ever considers THAT will be the outcome when ya start flailing your "nuke" card all about.
Or, at least that seems to be the situation in stories like this.

Anyway, very nice story. Has a Super 'Stache

Axel Nyan