Everybody, please scroll to the bottom of the page on the latest chapter and read the author's note before reading the story itself. it is very important you do this.
I'm confuse, how in his way to the castle he just end in the middle of the Ocean? And very depth of it for that matter? Well this story became more interesting, and this Calypso must be very strong if she manage to seduce a freaking god, well a very weak and just discovering his power god, but a god not the lest.
Oh boy if he can control all water I can't wait to see what he can do with rain…or blood (going a little in avatar) Just a suggestion, every brain is inside a pool of blood all the time, is kind of a secondary defense system, thats why your head bleed if you get a depth cut…and also a interesting way to use your powers if you control water
1869486 Ah that might be helpful to use in the story. Also, he ended up in the middle of the ocean in the story because he wasn't watching where he was going, then flew into the side of a cliff. Maybe it was a beachside cliff? And, maybe he just drifted and fell deeper in the story. But, I'm glad to see you think the story is getting better! (also, if you've ever read the Odyssey, than you probably know that Calypso is a reference to Greek mythology!)
Edit: Also, my character isn't necessarily a god, more just a person gifted by the spirits. Lol, that would be pretty cool, though.
Everybody, please scroll to the bottom of the page on the latest chapter and read the author's note before reading the story itself. it is very important you do this.
Jeez man everytime there's a new chapter I think I cry a litte, that's how much I love this dude
1869179 Lol I'm glad you like it! I can't wait til you finish the latest chapter, got a twist to it! As M. Night Shymalan would: WHAT A TWEEST!
I'm confuse, how in his way to the castle he just end in the middle of the Ocean? And very depth of it for that matter?
Well this story became more interesting, and this Calypso must be very strong if she manage to seduce a freaking god, well a very weak and just discovering his power god, but a god not the lest.
Oh boy if he can control all water I can't wait to see what he can do with rain…or blood (going a little in avatar) Just a suggestion, every brain is inside a pool of blood all the time, is kind of a secondary defense system, thats why your head bleed if you get a depth cut…and also a interesting way to use your powers if you control water
1869486 Ah that might be helpful to use in the story. Also, he ended up in the middle of the ocean in the story because he wasn't watching where he was going, then flew into the side of a cliff. Maybe it was a beachside cliff? And, maybe he just drifted and fell deeper in the story. But, I'm glad to see you think the story is getting better! (also, if you've ever read the Odyssey, than you probably know that Calypso is a reference to Greek mythology!)
Edit: Also, my character isn't necessarily a god, more just a person gifted by the spirits. Lol, that would be pretty cool, though.