Thanks for the criticizm. I'm going to be editing the stories as I go, and I encourage you all to treat me like the worst shit in the world in your criticizm! It inspires me to keep writing, and eventually, I'm going to hit this fucking nail right on the motherfucking head!
1737013 Ah, so when I show I'm accepting of the criticizm, people approve? Good to know. Again, thanks for your hate EVER so much, it's going to make me get this shit better. I wish you the best of luck in your own fanfic writing. I give you 7 mustaches
You should have started with a different type of story. Jumping headlong into this sort of thing right off will be, at best, embarrassing for you. This is the worst story type to begin with, especially if you're new to this - you've essentially bitten yourself in the ass.
Start with something you're pretty sure you can pull off - comedy, for instance - then build up to different types. Work on our characterization. on't rush your story - there's no time limit and chapters don't need to be that small. Instead of just stringing words together and tossing them out put some thought into what you're doing, because you're going to be judged on it, and you'll likely not find the verdict pleasing.
1737120 Like I said before, I'm going to be editing them as I go. Besides, I've never been very good at comedy, and if I tried some kind of dark or tragedy, it might be a bit too disturbing, as my mind is a virtual cesspool of vicious, evil thoughts deep within my psyche. Thanks for the advice, though.
At least try with something you're fairly sure you can pull off well. As an example, look at this.
Oky, so that probably a pretty massively overcomplicated example, but my point was I know I can pull off poetry, so that's what I did. And that was the work of three or four moths before I even posted it - yu don't need to post something immediately after you write it - edit it before, not after, because once they read something, they're not going to look at it again, regardless of whether you've improved it later.
You're going to be judged on what's there right now, and if they don't like what you've written, they won't take into account you'll 'tidy it later.'
1737210 Eh, well, by this point I doubt I'll have many readers anyway. I thank you for your advice, and once I finish my third part here, I'll try and see what kinds of things I can write. All I know is, if I do decide to write something dark, and it's declared the most disturbing thing since Sweet Apple Massacre and Cupcakes, then just know that it'll be all because of your suggestion and that isn't negative, as those stories have as many people that love them as they do people that hate them, if not more! All I know is... I might end up frightening some people with my psychopathic/sociopathic tendencies
1737029 You want criticism to make you angry and write on?
This is the gayest fucking story I've ever read. It's as if you pulled a book out of your ass, and then revised it to be even worse. The people that participated in this piece of shit will all burn in hell when they die. You're the worst, and I hope that this effects the way that you are. You'll never be the man that you're mother is.
and my older brother's was an American bald eagle clutching a U.S. flag, as he was in the National Guard. My father was a contractor in Iraq, so he wasn't able to be there at the moment.
Your story isn't so bad, I've always enjoyed when the author sees them self in the story. It just adds an aspect that you can't find that often. Please continue with more after this one!
DO YOU EVEN LEARN?
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Thanks for the criticizm. I'm going to be editing the stories as I go, and I encourage you all to treat me like the worst shit in the world in your criticizm! It inspires me to keep writing, and eventually, I'm going to hit this fucking nail right on the motherfucking head!
1737012 There we go.
Upvote.
1737013 Ah, so when I show I'm accepting of the criticizm, people approve? Good to know. Again, thanks for your hate EVER so much, it's going to make me get this shit better. I wish you the best of luck in your own fanfic writing. I give you 7 mustaches
You should have started with a different type of story. Jumping headlong into this sort of thing right off will be, at best, embarrassing for you. This is the worst story type to begin with, especially if you're new to this - you've essentially bitten yourself in the ass.
Start with something you're pretty sure you can pull off - comedy, for instance - then build up to different types. Work on our characterization. on't rush your story - there's no time limit and chapters don't need to be that small. Instead of just stringing words together and tossing them out put some thought into what you're doing, because you're going to be judged on it, and you'll likely not find the verdict pleasing.
dude. dude. go read this.
no seriously go read this
1737120 Like I said before, I'm going to be editing them as I go. Besides, I've never been very good at comedy, and if I tried some kind of dark or tragedy, it might be a bit too disturbing, as my mind is a virtual cesspool of vicious, evil thoughts deep within my psyche. Thanks for the advice, though.
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At least try with something you're fairly sure you can pull off well. As an example, look at this.
Oky, so that probably a pretty massively overcomplicated example, but my point was I know I can pull off poetry, so that's what I did. And that was the work of three or four moths before I even posted it - yu don't need to post something immediately after you write it - edit it before, not after, because once they read something, they're not going to look at it again, regardless of whether you've improved it later.
You're going to be judged on what's there right now, and if they don't like what you've written, they won't take into account you'll 'tidy it later.'
1737210 Eh, well, by this point I doubt I'll have many readers anyway. I thank you for your advice, and once I finish my third part here, I'll try and see what kinds of things I can write. All I know is, if I do decide to write something dark, and it's declared the most disturbing thing since Sweet Apple Massacre and Cupcakes, then just know that it'll be all because of your suggestion and that isn't negative, as those stories have as many people that love them as they do people that hate them, if not more! All I know is... I might end up frightening some people with my psychopathic/sociopathic tendencies
Uh, don't count on it.
1737029 You want criticism to make you angry and write on?
This is the gayest fucking story I've ever read. It's as if you pulled a book out of your ass, and then revised it to be even worse. The people that participated in this piece of shit will all burn in hell when they die. You're the worst, and I hope that this effects the way that you are. You'll never be the man that you're mother is.
1738656 Ah, yes! THE CRITICIZM FEELS SO GOOD! AHAHAHAHA! YES! CRITICIZE MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1738656 Btw, I worked on this on my own. Nobody else helped. SO YES, I GET ALL OF THE CRITICIZM!
1739491 >:D
Hooah!
Your story isn't so bad, I've always enjoyed when the author sees them self in the story. It just adds an aspect that you can't find that often. Please continue with more after this one!