• Member Since 29th Aug, 2012
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A short story about two ponies who work inside of a nuclear launching silo. After given an order to fire back at Manehattan for reasons unknown, Ponyville is shrouded in nuclear winter. Broken Arrow and Empty Quiver accept that they are the sole survivors, but they couldn't be more wrong.

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While the story was a bit fast paced and the length could have been drastically increased, along with a few errors here and there, it was quick and satisfyingly dark. Personally, I like it, but it could use a bit of reworking. Anyway, take a fav and a like.

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Yeah, it was just something in my head and I wanted to write a short story to introduce myself to the site. I obviously put some thought in to it, but I'll be putting more in my future, longer stories. Thanks for your comment it was helpful!

I should stop reading stories that makes me shiver, scared or sad..
But i don't :applejackconfused:

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Hnnng!! So cute twilight! *hugs*

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That means I did my job! Thanks for reading! :raritywink:

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*tosses a like and a fave*
it's dangerous to write alone, take this!

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haha, thanks a bunch!

Oh! I feel like I should add this as well, some folks might not know this, but theres a reason behind the OCs names, you should google them. :derpytongue2:

Ah I do so like stories that resolve around nuclear weaponry.
That being said, I have to ask, what's your inspiration for this particular fic?

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oddly enough, I dreamed it. I hadn't slept well the night before so when I finally collapsed today, I dreamed this story. Of course, it was a tad more over the top. and it didn't have ponies.

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