As Apple Bloom got into bed, Applejack began to speak the tale of a young princess and a magical harp.
This is a short story, but that shouldn't stop you from reading it. This is also my first piece.
As Apple Bloom got into bed, Applejack began to speak the tale of a young princess and a magical harp.
This is a short story, but that shouldn't stop you from reading it. This is also my first piece.
Powerful.
The punctuation needs rework, however, but the story is still very powerful. Sad but not depressing, dark but not darkening. Nice work.
It's odd, you said she met a dragon, and yet afterwards you mentioned a dog?
119348 thanks I think that was a mistake. I'll try and fix it.
I feel like
Chris Van AllsburgHarris Burdick deserves a word of acknowledgment here.