I reserve all rights to first post.

Anyways, enjoy this fic. Critique it, or whatever. Feedback is appreciated. I think I kind of rushed the clop in this. Your opinion, though.

1678531 I dun leik.

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It has your name in it.

Be grateful when it gets posted!

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Eh, it's okay. Nothing too special.

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Meh. I felt as if I rushed it.

i shall read this later in a secluded corner of my room

, but I'm tensing every body in my muscle to make sure she goes first

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Shit. Lol. Thanks. This was unedited, to be honest. I don't know where my editor is.

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There are not enough Spitfire fics. We need more like this.

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YEEEEES. Spitfire is best non-mane 6 pony.

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1681938 I think Vinyl is the best non mane 6 pony

HAH YOLO!!!!!!

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Lol.

1681912 Too fuckin' right

It's like I have a dog in my brain yelling 'Squirrel!'

Up reference.

YOLO REFERENCE FUUUUU

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Maybe, but it's still okay. Nothing to get too excited over, but I like it.

I am interested in seeing where it goes, and what you do with it.

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Nopony noticed the 'Dr.Who' reference. :c

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Well, it's just a one shot... Until I realized that it could use another chapter.

More you Bitch!!!!

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Soon.

velosarapters are better....

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Too Right lad.
Too right.

1681912 agreed.

oh, and I think it would have been better to leave Anthony as an anonymous human.

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I second that motion.

I demand MOAR!

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If this was second person, I would have. I just... I'm not good at second person yet. But, I understand the pain of Anthony.

Oh god the references! (Faux feint)
More please good sir

1702240 it's all right. except my brother's name is Anthony

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I hope somepony noticed the Dr. Who one, at least...

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Looks like your brother...

*Takes off glasses*

Got a taste of fire...

(YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH!!)

1702482 heh. but I want that! not him...

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Suddenly; Fireflash appears and bangs Spitfire!

(YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH!)

1702544 that's better.

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Second hand bitch?
Bitch please if I'm correct your Canadian therefore your the worlds bitch.

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Eeeee-nope!

1702482 the hourglass cutie mark?

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Well, not only that, but the part about Smith.

1706607 have no fear for now it has been noticed (dramatic pose)

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Good!

Mmm. I like it!

I especially like how you introduced Humans in Equestria! It's better than "Human bones pone" and there's no background on how that Human arrived in Equestria.

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I wanted to try something different. Thanks for enjoying it!

*slightly confused :P

But overall, I got the references (YOLO, Up, yes, Doctor Who...) so you get a like

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Finally, another person noticed the Dr. Who reference.

New chapter soon. Got 2k words ready for it. Just writing out the rest.

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Which reminds me... I should be helping my friend with his suspense story :P

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No. Read, you must!

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N-new chapter? ...

...

...

Have my heart and my soul.

Umm... actually, all I can give you is a I.O.U #241

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Soon, my friend.

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This also means I need to read the whole chapter... hehehee, I mean, RE-read it... yeah...

Maybe I'll find that doctor who reference.