Will Luna continue to be plagued by her past? Will she be able to find peace of mind?
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Suddenly this thing is missing a whole ton of chapters but my "To Read" chapter counter just went up
3683344 Its a full on rewrite. Its the same story, just rewritten.
When is this story coming back, I miss it sooooooo much!
4137026 I'm not exactly sure...I've kinda lost interest in MLP.
That's a shame, it's understandable, but a shame. Hope all goes well
4141666 But...so you know, I am doing a 'remake' of the MLP universe to an extent. Its now a single kingdom in the world I designed.
Really? do tell?
I am interested
4141910 Well, I'm still generally working on it. But it requires me to remake the characters and the general ideas. They're far less childish.
4148015 well, I'm looking forward to it
Please when it's fin make a blog or even message me because this will be amazing I'm sure!
4149197 Hehe. It'll be pretty damn good.
4149402 I'm sure
4151500 Check my blog here. You'll see more info.
Update soon please :D
4213825 I already said this in my blog...
I left the fandom.
There are SO many paragraphs that could have been cut to make this chapter more engaging. Just because you can stretch out an entire chapter with exposition and inner thoughts doesn't mean you HAVE to! I mean, what's the point of writing an entire paragraph asking questions about Nightmare Moon's identity that the audience can easily ask THEMSELVES without said paragraph, if you were going to follow it IMMEDIATELY after this paragraph with a line of dialogue bringing up the EXACT SAME QUESTIONS YOU ALREADY POINTED OUT!!!
In the censored words of the immortal Yatzee "THIS IS NOT GOOD STORYTELLING! You're suppose to WEAVE exposition into the narrative, not hand the audience a #### glossary as they walk into the theatre!"
issue. She hasn't been to Canterlot Castle. She and Tia lived in the everfree forest castle. how do you mess that up?
5169692 Perhaps they were built with the same/similar floor plan? That would account for her knowing where Celestia's room was.