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Cynical


Pretends to know what they're doing

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"My name is Rainbow Dash... and I am an egghead"

A/N: Boredom: Biggest cause of random fictions since I made up this statistic.

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DAT CONCEPT

1602784

Too descriptive?

1604870

Good to know, thanks for the comment
:pinkiehappy:

This was......shockingly touching.

The Concept seems solid, considering how much weight people actually tend to place on the masks they wear. Sooner or later, if they don't take it off to breathe, it BECOMES their face. The idea of the two opening up to each othere is touching, even in a friendshippy way only, because it takes some real trust to take off that kind of mask.

I'd know. Once you get the idea that it's better to hide your true self, it's really hard to break that ideal, and the more people see that mask, the harder it becomes to break. The fact that the two are willing to admit to each other is akin to giving someone a loaded gun, safety off, pointing it at your head, and TRUSTING them not to pull the trigger.

Sadly, I've seen what happens when that trust is misplaced.

Those kinds of secrets are often underestimated by others, and when that trust is broken....the results are never pretty, even when everyone accepts it.

Though, the fact that it's TWILIGHT and RAINBOW DASH means the worst PROBABLY won't happen, though we may still drown in the feels and the d'awws.

That is, if you continue.

Venficus

A comment?
On this?

Welp, I have my proof that I've died.

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And yeah... that just about sums it up, eventually the mask becomes built up enough to never be taken off and people start again with said mask.

And on the continuing front?
Unlikely... but possible.

This should keep going! I mean if that is okay with you :fluttershysad:.

2561406

Too.
Many.
Sequel.
Requests...

*Adds to the pile of work*

... I was really hoping for comedy.
I enjoyed what was put up in front of me, mind. I don't blame you for my not getting a comedy, especially since this was tagged slice of life and this story so wonderfully explores the idea of having masks to hide who we truly are.
But I was really, really hoping for a comedy.

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