Mating season is in full-swing and Spitfire is feeling love for the very first time - all centered around the Wonderbolts' newest recruit, Rainbow Dash. But love never went smoothly. Sequel to "Over The Rainbow."
The Running of The Rutting festival marks the end of Mating Season, where all the ponies that attend gleefully chase each other around the forest to try and catch/fuck them. It's all consensual, so there's no worry. It's an ancient tradition that very few bronies know about and that Faust is completely oblivious about*, dating back to when finding a mate meant life or death for a herd. Very dark times where a herd was almost always at risk of getting killed or devoured by monsters.
*I love mixing fiction with meta; like the show itself is just a documentary of the world of Equestria in the form of a children's show. Almost like Galaxy Quest. I like to have fun like that.
What?
Seriously...that sounds like the FiM franchise and a porn studio got together and this was the result.
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The Running of The Rutting festival marks the end of Mating Season, where all the ponies that attend gleefully chase each other around the forest to try and catch/fuck them. It's all consensual, so there's no worry. It's an ancient tradition that very few bronies know about and that Faust is completely oblivious about*, dating back to when finding a mate meant life or death for a herd. Very dark times where a herd was almost always at risk of getting killed or devoured by monsters.
*I love mixing fiction with meta; like the show itself is just a documentary of the world of Equestria in the form of a children's show. Almost like Galaxy Quest. I like to have fun like that.
make moreplease
I'm looking forward to where this is going
But, by the looks of it, I'll have to wait 2 more months before it comes
2533361 Why do you say that?!
2534531 Well, maybe 2 months was an overestimation. You do seem to be updating this story quicker now.
2535808 Yep! Tell me: What are your favorite parts and what do you love about 'em? I need some critique/feedback...
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Sorry, I'm terrible with critiques =(
Just keep doing what you're doing.
(By the way, I hope that when Spitfire + RD finally...you know () that it will be worth the wait )
2538626 Can you at least tell me your favorite parts?
2538626 Oh! And it will be worth the wait. Very much so...
2542786 I'd have to say Chapter 5. Very well written. Chapter 6 is a bit over-the-top in my opinion...but the the rest is great!
2542788 I'll look forward to it
As a thank you, have this (found it on dA):
doctorraz.deviantart.com/art/Rainbow-Fire-colored-360108473?q=gallery%3Adoctorraz&qo=3
2543245 I can't see it...
2543226 Chapter 6? Duly noted. I was thinking of changing it a bit, anyway.
2548768 You might have to copy and paste the URL. It doesn't work for me either.
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