Mating season is in full-swing and Spitfire is feeling love for the very first time - all centered around the Wonderbolts' newest recruit, Rainbow Dash. But love never went smoothly. Sequel to "Over The Rainbow."
Boy...normally, the point where the two would-be lovers admit their feelings for each other is a point of romantic resolution, generally marking a climax (if not the climax) in a story like this (pun not intended). The fact that you've used the revelation of their feelings as a means of elevating the overall tension in the story is at once both impressive and weird as all get out.
2449856 Thank you very much. Yeah, it's gonna get tense. Eventually, boundaries are gonna get thinner and thinner and thinner until it bursts with pure, white-hot passion.
Boy...normally, the point where the two would-be lovers admit their feelings for each other is a point of romantic resolution, generally marking a climax (if not the climax) in a story like this (pun not intended). The fact that you've used the revelation of their feelings as a means of elevating the overall tension in the story is at once both impressive and weird as all get out.
2449856 Thank you very much. Yeah, it's gonna get tense. Eventually, boundaries are gonna get thinner and thinner and thinner until it bursts with pure, white-hot passion.