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Burnie


I'm a Senior in high school. I head the Lit Mag at school, and I write pony stuff on the side when I can/feel like it.

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A dark cult lies in the depths of the Everfree forest. Led by the ambitious Graphite Star, this group of unicorns has delved into the deepest secrets of magic and resorted to twisted methods of gaining power. This story explores the ways in which unicorns perform their magic by showing how the cult exploits the science behind magic use to amplify their power. In the cult's adventures, they will clash with Twilight, Shining Armor, and Cadance, raising questions of the ethics of magic and presenting theories on the history of the unicorn horn.

(marked gore for violence with magic and severing horns, nothing too brutal)

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Huh, this is a very interesting idea that I don't believe I've ever seen done before. The mutilation seems a little... severe, there are other methods I can think of to achieve a similar effect, but they'd be incredibly brutal surgeries all the same; I guess the thing that bugs me the most is that they're essentially giving up a large portion of their abilities, telekinesis is no small thing after all. Nonetheless I'm curious to see how this develops, and I can't help but wonder why Twilight and the others would be in such stern opposition of them; sure they're brutally maiming themselves in the name of greater power, but isn't it their bodies, their decision?

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