Name: Lauren Age: 15 Affiliation: Pegasister Pony couples I ship- AppleDash RainbowHoops SorenRainbow Rumbaloo PinkieShy RaityxFlutterShy Dr. HoovesxDerpy
Rainbow Dash has always known what she has wanted... To be apart of the Wonderbolts. And when the opportunity comes, she jumps on it. Even if it means leaving everything behind. Soon she starts having feelings for her teammate Soarin, which he eargerly returns. But then Hoops returns into her life. And makes her feel so much more than Soarin ever did. But being with him risks her flying with the Wonderbolts... And where does a Applejack fit into all of this confusion?
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Rule of thumb: If there's a typo in the first sentence of your description, you need to proofread more. If there's more than one, you're going to draw negative attention.
Not counting the odd grammar with the word has appearing twice, and the ... leading into a capital letter, you still have "apart" instead of "a part", and "the wonder bolts" instead of "The Wonderbolts".
I figured I'd give your story a read, but it's uninspired and full of bad formatting and typos. Don't give up, but please put more time into proofreading.
Isn't it las pegasus
1580190 Actually, that canon has been shut down when Hasbro came out with a map that Los Pegasus was, in fact, for Los Angelus.
MOAAAAAAAAARRR
I wanna see how this ends
even with the misspelling i saw its still a good fic keep up the good work
Make MOAR!!!!!! I LOVE IT! WANNA SEE HOW IT'LL TURN OUT BETWEEN SOARIN AND RAINBOW!
Wow. Nice one.