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The Party Diva

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When Rarity makes a new dress Pinkie is very excited for her. She decides to throw a party for her, but she can't find the things she needs anywhere. She decides to ask her friends for help and they get everything done just in time. But will Rarity like the party or will their efforts be in vain?

Story written with a bit of help from FlanChan, a good friend!

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FlanChan

FlanChan #1 · Nov 5th, 2012 · · ·

Thanks for the crediting
This story is so old, I just wish that you would've let me go back through and edit it for grammar problems
Oh well, hope people enjoy it nonetheless

asmcint

asmcint #2 · Nov 5th, 2012 · · ·

Interesting. While it's better than it could have been, there's still a lot of room to improve here. Keep it up.

Honey_Darling

Honey_Darling #3 · Nov 5th, 2012 · · ·

I would have let you... but I was in a crunch for time and you were busy with your own things. Don't take that the wrong way, it is awesome how your story is going!