This. This is a good thing.

This just makes the situation worse...

I read this. Now, everytime Fluttershy says anything close to sexual, ever, I'll remember this.

I'm not sure if I will continue to read these chapters of your story, but I have to admit that you wrote this situation very graphic and comprehensible.

One minor mistake: "She cast one final glance and the closed bedroom door": and → at.

Yes, I do believe Mr. George Takei said it best. Oh my. This was just as well written as the rest of Unexpected Confessions and it hit near that delicate balance that is required for good sensual literature. Not too explicit, while still being juicy, and not tacky like straight up pornographic writing.

Bravo. Bravo.

sadly, I feel this is going to be in the dashboard very soon

dis sum serious ass clop material here

even though the right expression is 'it takes two to tango'

God damit I really shouldn't be reading this in class, I'm using all of my will to not get a boner right now. Good Work.

Well, this is somewhat disappointing. For why, I defer you to this blog post.

Is there anywhere that you'll be posting Unexpected Confessions in it's entirety? (story + clop all in one)

1567404 No. I am separating out the mature scenes (the clop as you put it) because there are some readers who don't want to read it, and because posting it in the main story would force me to raise the rating from Teen to Mature. Both of these things would alienate readers.

However, future mature portions f the story will have the same chapter posted in both stories, just with the clop edited out of the Teen version. That was the plan with this scene, bit the chapter had scenes with multiple potential couples, keeping it from working as a stand-alone story (which some people would have read it as).

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Ah. Well, that's your decision. I can't and won't force you to do something with which you aren't comfortable.

Unfortunately, I likely will not be reading these now. Call it a matter of principle. I'll keep Unexpected Confessions in my read later list for the time being just in case; but chances are, I'll just skirt around it. Sorry.

1572969 That's a shame, but I understand.

Thanks for the links between stories, it's a good practice, allows the reader to go back and forth between these mature and non-mature chapters easily.

30 imaginary bucks says that RD or Angel listened in, and since she was crying "Rarity", RD will think they had sex. Just my guess...

1555674 Yes but it's a threesome, it's kind of the whole point.