You should seriously replace all instances of 'arm', 'girl', and 'boy' with the appropriate equine terms; it's very distracting. That or tag the story as anthro.
6169589 simple mental translation error. i know i normaly try to put 'hand' as 'claw', same for a lot of others with 'arm' and 'foreleg' and the likes!
You should seriously replace all instances of 'arm', 'girl', and 'boy' with the appropriate equine terms; it's very distracting. That or tag the story as anthro.
With the gremlins and the double Rainboom
HA! HA! HA!
You’re the only boy who’s ever tried to keep up with me, and you’re the only one can get ahead of me.
Correction:You’re the only boy who’s ever tried to keep up with me, and you’re the only one who can get ahead of me.
6169589 simple mental translation error. i know i normaly try to put 'hand' as 'claw', same for a lot of others with 'arm' and 'foreleg' and the likes!